May 29th, 2011 at 04:37am
I thought this was really good; it totally reminds us all of when we were young and free. Haha. :3
I liked the layout of this but not quite the picture. I just felt like it didn't match, but that's just me, I guess. :P I like how you used speech, and then described and explained more about it. I chose to comment on this one because once I saw the word 'kuya', I just had to choose it! I'm Filipino! xD The words in italics were also very effective, like a lot of people said.
So, all in all, I think this was very sweet. Things like that do happen in real life, kids do do that, so I think this is also very realistic. Good job on this! :3
I loved this story. I was a bit confused about the whole presents and kuya Mikko, but still, that only added to how touching and beautiful this short little story was. Even when I was a little kid, I didn't think those things, only about the presents. It was that which I related to most. I think it's important to be able to relate to a story, too. In my opinion, that is. This story really portrayed a wonderful message. And I liked the format of the story, too. It's my first time seeing it like that.
I loved it! :3 I hope I get to see more of your work.
-Luna