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  • Dreams.of.Someday

    Dreams.of.Someday (900)

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    Thanks!!!! :D
    July 30th, 2010 at 03:16am
  • onlyimagine33

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    Angela!
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    I LOVE this! Your writing has gotten soooo much better!
    I love the plot so far! It seems veryyy interesting ;)
    Umm... just watch out for saying the same word over and over again. Like in the paragraph you talk about her hair... you say hair like five times :P
    Haha, but yeahhh... this is very good so far! I demand you keep writing it!
    Oh! And this is Ashley by the way :D
    July 29th, 2010 at 11:09pm