I liked this, you sent two split images in my head--I picture a couple on a boat, and all of the metaphoric imagery then I also see what the metaphor images represent and I can take that into mind. I made no sense but I'm basically just saying I see the couple on this boat, vacationing probably, then I also see the boat and how everything around it and how it represents the relationship in general. It's sad if I take those two concepts into hand, because it's a powerful use of imagery and mind sense. And even though it has your mind actively thinking, you can understand because it's relate-able. I especially loved how you made it flow together so smoothly and easily, there wasn't much disruption and if I must be awkward and random: Can You Keep Me by November Blessing sure does seem to set me into the mood of reading this (:.
I liked this a whole bunch, I think without your author's note I would've never guessed but then I read it and again, two images came up. So this was a good read (:
I liked this a whole bunch, I think without your author's note I would've never guessed but then I read it and again, two images came up. So this was a good read (: