The layout was simple, and perfect. It's nice to look at, and doesn't have those bright colors that hurt my eyes. You could change the green on green contrast, it sort of hard to focus with it like that.
For it being the first contest you entered, you did a good job. You followed the rules, and that's always a plus in my book. I feel as if you actually sat down, planned, and had a good idea forming. Then you wrote it down, and you succeeded in what you wanted to accomplish. You didn't just write down a bunch of nonsense, you gave the characters personality, and emotions. You were able to grace over periods of time, but it still make sense. I loved how you Grace was able to replace the pain his Dad had caused him, and how sweet there relationship was. You gave good descriptions, which I love seeing as I can't see into your mind and know what your describing.
There weren't any grammatical errors that I caught, so that's very good. I might have missed some maybe, but it looked as if you actually proof read unlike some other people.
Overall it was a wonderful job, it is a hard song to write to, and I think you pulled it off very well. Your entry was well thought out, and had a good plan. You must be really proud of this piece, I know I would be if it were mine. Thank you for entering, and sorry about the long wait, winners will be posted soon. Good Luck!
Dude! I loved it. Ah, Down To Earth is such a sad song, I feel bad for lil' ol' Justin. xD But this was really great and I liked that Justin blushed because I always do. lol Greay job! :)
The layout was simple, and perfect. It's nice to look at, and doesn't have those bright colors that hurt my eyes. You could change the green on green contrast, it sort of hard to focus with it like that.
For it being the first contest you entered, you did a good job. You followed the rules, and that's always a plus in my book. I feel as if you actually sat down, planned, and had a good idea forming. Then you wrote it down, and you succeeded in what you wanted to accomplish. You didn't just write down a bunch of nonsense, you gave the characters personality, and emotions. You were able to grace over periods of time, but it still make sense. I loved how you Grace was able to replace the pain his Dad had caused him, and how sweet there relationship was. You gave good descriptions, which I love seeing as I can't see into your mind and know what your describing.
There weren't any grammatical errors that I caught, so that's very good. I might have missed some maybe, but it looked as if you actually proof read unlike some other people.
Overall it was a wonderful job, it is a hard song to write to, and I think you pulled it off very well. Your entry was well thought out, and had a good plan. You must be really proud of this piece, I know I would be if it were mine. Thank you for entering, and sorry about the long wait, winners will be posted soon. Good Luck!