Beast - Comments

I hope you decide to update this soon. :) in all of the years I have spent on Mibba, and of all the stories I've read, this is easily in my top five favorites. I loved it in its original form but it's got so much potential to be something truly amazing in the new layout. I truly hope you update somewhere in the near future, because I miss this story so much. :)

<3 Michele

I am loving the rewrite and I do sympathize. I was the same way with one of my stories - by the time I got back to writing it, I didn't know what to write so I started over.

Can not wait for more!

Update soon please!

Love it! Update soon please!

I love it :D I can't wait for more :D

this is great, so hooking!

Love the story!

Loving the update and great to see this story back again :-)

I loved the update!
It was amazing!
:D
Please update again soon?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
:D

Loving it!!
Please update soon!!

i don't really remember the beginning of the old story- though they lived on a campus or something, i think? but i must say that I LOVE these two new chapters can't wait to see where it'll go this time

It's different the the first one but I like :)
Update soon

Protective much mr. Beast, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

This version is so different from the original. In a good way. Is the story line going to be the same or different?

I still can't get over how much you've grown... like I can't even believe that this is the same writer. It's super exciting for me since I've been a fan since the very beginning, obviously. ;) And I know we're best friends and everything and I'm obligated to say nice stuff but honestly, this is such gold. GOLD I TELL YOU.

I can literally imagine every scene to the very last detail because your descriptions are so spot on. I'm also very jealous of your ever-growing vocabulary. Fak u. Oh, and I quite like the new POV. And just how you've changed the story in general. You're truly going all out on your revamp, haha.

And I honestly couldn't copy and paste a favourite sentence or part because there was too much greatness here. Ugh. <3

Keep me updated on your updates because I am so freaking in love with this.

As much as I absolutely ADORED the original version of this story, I am beginning to love this one even more. In the two chapters you've written for this version, I have nothing bad to say (not that I ever would either :D), I love the third person narrative, Your descriptions of what happens sentence by sentence are so lovely detailed that I often feel like I am Avery or its like I'm a 'fly on the wall' so to speak.

I absolutely cannot wait for more of this story. I know it's hard for some authors to update on a regular basis, but please don't keep me/us waiting!!! :D
<3 Michele

I am already hooked on this story! Please update soon!

I LOVE this story!!!! I really love how you write and don't leave out a single detail. It's really great! I can't wait for more!

I wanted to be the first to break the 666 number because I'm best.
I'll be back to read latur. Don't u woray.

Please update more soon!!!!!!!