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  • a quarter and a kiss

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    I'm on Knight's side. Op. Sorry, it's just the way it is. I think he justified himself. Elle's just too pansy to try to really use her spurs and fix it.

    And, also, I like Knight's POV more for some reason. I don't know, man. He just seems more in the zone. If you get what I'm saying.
    January 9th, 2012 at 05:15am
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    He must've had a dang good reason to hit him. Knight's a knight. I don't think he would've done that unless he had to.
    January 9th, 2012 at 03:28am
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    Hold on, let me get into Annoying Teen Reader mode.
    Ahem.

    UPDATE THE FREAKING STORY ALREADY I DON'T CARE IF YOU HAVE FREAKING CLASS OR WHATEVER I DON'T EVEN CARE IF YOU HAVE A JOB AND YOU HAVE TO TEXT YOUR ONLINE BIFFLE WHILE TAKING SCORES YOU SHOULD BE WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTER INSTEAD YOU WEIRDO.

    Okay. I'm done.
    October 15th, 2011 at 12:09am
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    Ugh. Casey, seriously. This is soooooo good. Last line, unf:
    I held her like I held the words I wanted so badly to tell her.
    Brilliant. Genius. Awesome. Stellar. Wonderful. j;lkajfkjs;ldkfj Flailing fingers.
    September 25th, 2011 at 07:02pm
  • lovely youth

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    no no no Knight.
    Secrets are BAD.
    September 25th, 2011 at 06:31pm
  • lovely youth

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    This could be interesting.
    September 13th, 2011 at 03:14am
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    Anna’s a sophomore in college now, somewhere across the state. Chapter 21

    And now Anna's back. As a junior. Sharing a dorm with Elle.

    Holy shittake mushrooms on a kebob stick. I like where this is going. :3
    September 12th, 2011 at 07:23am
  • CecilioLux

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    Just read all of this in the last couple of hours and I'm seriously in love with these two so much.
    July 25th, 2011 at 05:53am
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    Wuhxhdjdjhxh I thought that Elle might have been a virgin. Hmmm. Well, I'm glad they didn't bump uglies just yet. Eeep.
    July 23rd, 2011 at 12:33am
  • lovely youth

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    Knight and Elle are so adorable and perfect despite all of their individual flaws.
    July 20th, 2011 at 08:46pm
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    I feel like I'm sobbing. But I'm not. I wish I could, though. If I could sob about a single fictional piece of work, be it a movie, a book, or even a freaking ballad, I'd choose this story, specifically this chapter.

    My absolute favorite line:
    She bit down on her lip, fingers curling around each other, eyes shutting tight, tight, tight – so tight, they might sew themselves together.

    I loved the entire last paragraph. Ahwww. I just want to sob, okay? Make me a freaking normal female teenager and let me sob at something fictional for once! Gosh. (Napoleon-style)

    Aaaaaaaand the UT thing. ha. I have a couple of friends going to UT. Believe it or not, it still might be a state school with our best football team, but it's hard to get it (class rank-wise). Top ten percent is the usual. Enough for your daily Texas Trivia.

    Sosososososo this was crazy and I loved it and yeah.
    July 15th, 2011 at 11:38pm
  • lovely youth

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    This chapter was insane. And awesome.
    It was adorable at first, and then when Elle hadn't said anything to Knight I got super worried. I was so into this chapter, haha.
    Nice work.
    July 15th, 2011 at 05:55am
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    My two favorite lines:
    "You found your true self, when you found love."

    Three days right now feels like three years. I understand. I do.


    I am sobbing. Well, not literally, but if I had any sort of cry-at-stories-and-sob-at-Disney-movies bone in my body, it's a given I would.
    AND NOW I WANNA KNOW WHAT ELLE SAYS. What if she wants to break up? No, that's not possible. :3 Is it? Okay, now I'm just worrying myself. The worst that could happen is she could be all like, "Heck naw, brah," and then Aiden could be in the house or something. Eeek.
    UPDATE SOON WOMAN.
    July 9th, 2011 at 07:52am
  • mockingbird;

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    AWWWWWWWWE.
    July 7th, 2011 at 04:41pm
  • breaktheroutine

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    I think i just squealed in my seat reading this. ah, update again soon!
    July 7th, 2011 at 03:51pm
  • lovely youth

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    Loved reading a bit of Knight's background. Seems like falling in love with Elle has really done him good.
    Great update, the end was very cute.
    July 6th, 2011 at 07:12pm
  • lovely youth

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    I want to get more into Knight's reaction to Elle saying "You weren't you". Some possibilities there?
    And I'm also worried about Ayden. He's digging a hole for himself to jump into here.
    Update soon?
    June 26th, 2011 at 09:59pm
  • outthewindow.

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    I'm sorry I haven't commented in such a long time.
    Been busy. Ya know?
    Anyway, this is as lovely as ever.
    Elle and Knight's relationship is so interesting and indescribably wonderful to read about.
    June 26th, 2011 at 08:18pm
  • mockingbird;

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    If ayden dies you are a dead woman.

    DEAD I TELL YOU.
    June 26th, 2011 at 05:20am
  • lovely youth

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    Great chapter.
    At the end, Elle was just WOW. It was intense.
    June 16th, 2011 at 05:06am