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  • lovely youth

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    Lunch on Thursday sounds like it's going to be interesting.
    May 15th, 2011 at 03:11am
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    ...temper of a neutered bull.
    lalalala

    Trust me, I’m not mad. I just can’t… I can’t have anyone touch me.
    SHE DOESN’T LIKE BEING TOUCHED. OOER. THIS IS SUCH A TWIST I LOVE IT I WANT TO SEE WHAT YA DO WIT IT.

    A girl can wish her lunacy unreal.
    Love this line.

    I need to be able to hear where I am as I run, so I can at least, right now, know where I stand. Run, run, run, girl, run.
    I have a feeling she’s gonna use this running thing once to get away from a bad sitiuation, or one that she finds uncomfortable and isn’t that tough (or maybe a situation that’s absolutely serious). I just have a feeling about her running, that it’s gonna be important.
    May 15th, 2011 at 01:52am
  • mockingbird;

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    Pure love, seriously that's all I can feel for this story.
    May 14th, 2011 at 05:48pm
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    Loved this chapter. I can't believe Knight exploded like that right after he heard her crying. But oh well, hopefully he makes it up to her.
    May 10th, 2011 at 01:27am
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    Casey, this was worth the wait.
    I've been MIA because my computer broke. My dad hasn't looked at it yet, so I'm assuming that it just overheated or something. Hopefully my stuff isn't all gone. So right now I can't answer Tumblr asks or write or anything.
    BUT ANYWAY. Yeah, so, this was just awesome. I love how Knight writes his feelings down. I would expect that from him. And I had a feeling it was gonna be Julie... I think I said so. But basically, Knight is a douchebag. What a prick. Dude needs to, like, get over himself and yeah. And I just love the pace that this is going at. I love slow stories, the buildup, all of that. So, yup. This was just excellent. And you say I'm a good writer? Darling, you're better than I could ever hope to be.
    May 8th, 2011 at 01:15pm
  • katelyn;

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    Casey my dear, this chapter was wonderful. I loved it.

    Oh god though, when Elle was crying I just wanted to swipe her up and hold her, which means I am now emotionally invested in this story!
    May 7th, 2011 at 06:50pm
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    No questions ma'am.

    I love this story so much I could cry. THEY NEED TO GET IT ON! SO MUCH SEXUAL TENSION!

    It's sad that Louis died but that f*cker had it coming to him.
    May 7th, 2011 at 05:32pm
  • Erinnnn.xo

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    yay you updated!!!
    Ikindof think Knight deserves to be mad
    but he can't make Elle tell him her secrets.

    great update i can't wait for the next one :)
    May 7th, 2011 at 03:25pm
  • Erinnnn.xo

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    This story is amazing, I'm so glad I found it.
    From the first word I was hooked!
    Please update soon
    April 28th, 2011 at 03:24am
  • lovely youth

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    KNIGHT IS SO ADORABLE.
    Awesome chapter.
    April 24th, 2011 at 09:42pm
  • katelyn;

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    OH MY GOD THAT WAS GREAT AND CAN I JUST HOLD KNIGHT? LIKE WHEN HE WHISPERED THAT PART ABOUT HIS MOMS WANTING HER TO STAY, UGH MY HEART WANTED TO LEAP FROM MY CHEST.
    LEAP. FROM. MY. CHEST.
    great chapter.
    April 23rd, 2011 at 11:53pm
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    intense.
    April 23rd, 2011 at 07:12pm
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    The breath I released following his words could blow down a house.
    Love this line.

    “They really want you to say,” Knight whispered, barely. It was meant as something for him, not for me, like maybe I wouldn’t want to stay, or maybe I would…
    He sounds so vulnerable. I love it.

    This was not the place. This was not the time. This was not me.
    asdfghjkl; Her daydream. And then she starts breaking down. And THEN THERE'S SOMEONE AT THE DOOR.
    I hope it's Allison.
    April 23rd, 2011 at 05:41am
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    LIKE RIGHT NOW WOULD BE GREAT.
    April 17th, 2011 at 08:04pm
  • a quarter and a kiss

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    UPDATE NOW.
    April 17th, 2011 at 08:03pm
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    UPDATE.
    April 17th, 2011 at 08:03pm
  • katelyn;

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    CASEY OMG I THINK I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP.

    seriously. it's really good. and knight just seems ksdjghakrjghlwejl. that means perfect btw. and the plot is so far great. like knight's moms, didn't see that coming, at all. and the boxing thing, it's great. something you wouldn't really think about, yet fits so wonderfully.

    as for a place, uh arizona, new mexico, texas (southern), georgia, florida. i could go on.
    April 15th, 2011 at 09:13am
  • lovely youth

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    Just started reading. This story is awesome, I love almost everything about it.
    And yeah, Texas seems pretty fitting.
    April 15th, 2011 at 06:51am
  • mockingbird;

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    Texas I agree :D

    DUDE

    OMG I LOVE THIS STORY

    PLEASE

    UPDATE

    OMG I'M FREAKING.
    April 10th, 2011 at 05:36pm
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    ...and it sounds like you're in Texas. No, seriously, it does.
    April 10th, 2011 at 12:34pm