Trust me, I’m not mad. I just can’t… I can’t have anyone touch me. SHE DOESN’T LIKE BEING TOUCHED. OOER. THIS IS SUCH A TWIST I LOVE IT I WANT TO SEE WHAT YA DO WIT IT.
A girl can wish her lunacy unreal. Love this line.
I need to be able to hear where I am as I run, so I can at least, right now, know where I stand. Run, run, run, girl, run. I have a feeling she’s gonna use this running thing once to get away from a bad sitiuation, or one that she finds uncomfortable and isn’t that tough (or maybe a situation that’s absolutely serious). I just have a feeling about her running, that it’s gonna be important.
Casey, this was worth the wait. I've been MIA because my computer broke. My dad hasn't looked at it yet, so I'm assuming that it just overheated or something. Hopefully my stuff isn't all gone. So right now I can't answer Tumblr asks or write or anything. BUT ANYWAY. Yeah, so, this was just awesome. I love how Knight writes his feelings down. I would expect that from him. And I had a feeling it was gonna be Julie... I think I said so. But basically, Knight is a douchebag. What a prick. Dude needs to, like, get over himself and yeah. And I just love the pace that this is going at. I love slow stories, the buildup, all of that. So, yup. This was just excellent. And you say I'm a good writer? Darling, you're better than I could ever hope to be.
OH MY GOD THAT WAS GREAT AND CAN I JUST HOLD KNIGHT? LIKE WHEN HE WHISPERED THAT PART ABOUT HIS MOMS WANTING HER TO STAY, UGH MY HEART WANTED TO LEAP FROM MY CHEST. LEAP. FROM. MY. CHEST. great chapter.
The breath I released following his words could blow down a house. Love this line.
“They really want you to say,” Knight whispered, barely. It was meant as something for him, not for me, like maybe I wouldn’t want to stay, or maybe I would… He sounds so vulnerable. I love it.
This was not the place. This was not the time. This was not me. asdfghjkl; Her daydream. And then she starts breaking down. And THEN THERE'S SOMEONE AT THE DOOR. I hope it's Allison.
CASEY OMG I THINK I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP.
seriously. it's really good. and knight just seems ksdjghakrjghlwejl. that means perfect btw. and the plot is so far great. like knight's moms, didn't see that coming, at all. and the boxing thing, it's great. something you wouldn't really think about, yet fits so wonderfully.
as for a place, uh arizona, new mexico, texas (southern), georgia, florida. i could go on.