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  • Death The Angel

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    Woah, this is such a unique story, I read it all in one go and it's so good >.< can't wait to read the sequel :)
    May 18th, 2013 at 01:24pm
  • Nerdybird123

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    I was recommended this, so I'm a bit late with commenting, but I love this. I really do. It has a very clever plot, and is very realistic. I easily connected with Baybelle (love that name btw). Over all, it's good stuff.
    May 8th, 2013 at 07:17am
  • Guest Pass

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    ch8,
    What makes Bay a freak? She seems like a normal kid
    August 5th, 2012 at 04:22am
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    ch7,
    Hmmm, that was sudden and harsh. Homosexual or not, seems like Mitchall took it too well, walking in on his father having sex with someone else

    You have alot of side stories and things that could be character development but seem kind of random. Right now I'm wondering where this is going,

    You started the book with the 'secret' of the colors; the rigid nature of the city but, so far no one seems to concerned about keeping the secret from the younger kids or even why the should keep it secret

    Why should they keep it secret?
    August 5th, 2012 at 03:09am
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    I like how it took a while for Bay to talk about Mitch's looks. Not as shallow as Sam

    No mention from the school of keeping the meaning of the color a secret. How do they keep a bunch of freshman from blurting it all over FB and Twitter?

    The preggers thing seems random.
    August 5th, 2012 at 02:51am
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    ch4, the principal could do with a bit more development. You could also expand on the announcement of what the colors mean
    August 5th, 2012 at 02:38am
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    Okay, so reading ch2 tells me how old they are, thanks
    August 5th, 2012 at 02:29am
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    You mention they met in 3rd grade but, not how old they were when the house caught fire. I'd like to know.
    August 5th, 2012 at 02:28am
  • Classic_Caryn

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    Try to write meaningful comments. Tell authors what you like or dislike about their story.
    Constructive criticism is always welcome.
    February 28th, 2012 at 02:41pm
  • NothinNNomore

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    Awww.
    February 28th, 2012 at 04:12am
  • NothinNNomore

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    That's sadd.
    February 25th, 2012 at 06:52am
  • NothinNNomore

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    Awwwww!
    January 17th, 2012 at 04:07am
  • NothinNNomore

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    He totally heard her!
    January 12th, 2012 at 04:13am
  • NothinNNomore

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    :) I'm curious to see where this goes
    September 1st, 2011 at 04:06am
  • NothinNNomore

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    They got out!! :DD
    August 23rd, 2011 at 02:55am
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    I wonder how she plans to get them out..
    August 16th, 2011 at 10:05am
  • NothinNNomore

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    Awww
    August 16th, 2011 at 08:07am
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    Awww
    August 16th, 2011 at 08:07am
  • Gab?

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    Awesome chapter!! I really love how this story is going!! I like that you're keeping it pretty realistic - as far as this story goes lmao - but I can't help but imagine how bad it will be when they get into a fight :/ But let's focus on the now and not the later, right? PLEASE update soon :D
    July 30th, 2011 at 11:28pm
  • NothinNNomore

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    Good chapterr
    July 28th, 2011 at 06:15am
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