July 30th, 2011 at 12:32am
Ahhh you have to update!
I'll go crazy waiting to read what's gonna happen next!
I love it, I'm so caught up between the characters that I can't even choose who I'm rooting for.
Very upredictable and professionally written. Great job!
Stupid stupid Rafe, for being Rafe and not Mack. Maybe we could combine them? No, just wouldn't work. Well Imma go ahead and clone Lex, let you carry on here with your heartbreak and dashed hopes :(
Or maybe I just hate Mack and Rafe. I don't know anymore. Stupid Mack for being so mean to his little brother, stupid Rafe for pushing his brother and guilting Lex into not wanting to be with him. I feel as though he is trapping her. They all seem to be riding rough-shod over each others feelings, seeking their own happinesses without caring about the others but the worst of it is that they're not even happy.
It's terrible ><
You and your plots. I say screw 'em.
Lovely update (well no- it was horrible and had me terrified and in tears, but that is only in the best and most worthy way and I would gladly give my tears and palpitations to this story again and again) and I look forward to the next.