The Strength of Fragility - Comments

  • nogetmeout

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    Hello, I'm here from comment swap! Can I first say that I really love the design of this layout? Pink and gray are such classic and beautiful colors. Also, I appreciate your correct grammar. It's crazy how many stories on here don't even capitalize. Your descriptions are so lush as well as your use of higher level words. Such an intriguing story, keep up the great work!
    June 6th, 2014 at 07:52am
  • The Misery Business

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    Hey!
    I found this story really intriguing! I've never read such fiction before so I was interested to see how it would turn out. Your characterisation seems spot on and I really love your use of description in this story. Keep up the good work! :)
    June 3rd, 2014 at 09:03pm
  • Katie2116

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    I got this story from Comment Swap and I actually love it! I was a major Twilight fan back in the day but I never read any fan fic. This is amazing, well written with an interesting plot line and an intriguing protagonist. You're doing a great job and I can't wait to read more. The pace is also great. Things are happening, but not too quickly. Keep up the good work!
    December 24th, 2013 at 05:22am
  • ironically1234

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    So first of all I loved your prologue. It really sparked up my curiousity. I liked how slowly you moved the relationship between Izzie and Jasper. It's moving just at the right pace. You have a great writing style. Nice job!
    July 18th, 2013 at 06:55pm
  • EscapedFate

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    excited for more, I really like this story!
    May 17th, 2013 at 05:43am
  • lady of the sunshine

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    Here from comment swap.

    Not a fan of Twilight personally, but I actually did get into your story a bit. You've got a really nice style of writing, and I really liked your prologue. I thought your layout added to the mood of the story really nicely, but was low-key enough to keep from taking away from the story. You've got a really nice story going here. If only you'd update again!
    May 4th, 2013 at 06:15pm
  • kailixx

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    i just found this story today and please update soon! it's definitely unlike any other story i've read.
    November 24th, 2012 at 04:09am
  • PhoebenPaige

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    Def cant wait for more :)
    July 28th, 2012 at 09:13am
  • china-doll

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    Hellllo, I'm here via comment swap.
    I've got to say, I'm not really a huge fan of Twilight, but this story had peaked my interest. The summary was what did it for me. The way you worded things made me want to keep reading on, and I'm quite glad I did. Also your layout and banner and everything is simple and doesn't distract from the story itself, which I've seen in a lot of the stories comment swap gives me. All in all, I really likes this and can't wait to see where it's going. Good job, keep it up!

    -Jess xx
    July 16th, 2012 at 03:13am
  • The Punisher

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    Interesting. I am not into Twilight really and I personally do not look forward to the conclusion which I am constanly viewing the trailer for but this was alright. Really I did not see anything special, it was different and I liked the banner, who is the girl? But I did not see much in depth thought as to what you are really trying to write, it seems like you would have to have read the books to have gotten what was going on and personally I hate that in a fan fiction. When I write I try to clear things up as much with being info dumpy. The story is decent, but not my favorite, please do not take this wrong way. Good luck and may the pen be ever in your favor.
    July 11th, 2012 at 08:06am
  • marshallomnipotence

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    LOL Comment Swap brought me here AGAIN, 4 minutes ago. All I said in my last comment was enough I think so I'll say it again, sorry...~ wow, wow and wow. I'm personally not into twilight and that but I was so intrigued by Izzy. The summery really sucked me in and I started to read I can not stop. Your a really awesome writing the descritions are amazing. I'm so eager to read more, as I have subscribed. Are you a professional? lol
    July 10th, 2012 at 02:22am
  • marshallomnipotence

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    Comment Swap~ wow, wow and wow. I'm personally not into twilight and that but I was so intrigued by Izzy. The summery really sucked me in and I started to read I can not stop. Your a really awesome writing the descritions are amazing. I'm so eager to read more, as I have subscribed. Are you a professional? lol
    July 10th, 2012 at 02:18am
  • hangsang.

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    Woah... This is a powerful story. When I first clicked on the title, I didn't really know what to expect. I saw the banner and the layout and I really liked it. The summary made me want to read ahead as it really captured my attention. The content... Just, wow. You're an amazing writer. Just, so much description, and so much power with each word you write. This was amazing.
    July 5th, 2012 at 08:44am
  • nana_loves_you

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    I have just found your wonderful story today and I must say you darling have captured my mind!! I love this story and can't get enough of it!! <3 :D I hope that you update soon?? I really want to know what's going to happen next! :D I'm captivated by your amazing work you seem like you can become a professional writer!! ^_^
    September 20th, 2011 at 07:13am
  • AlexisNicole822

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    ohmygosh! you need to update!!!!!
    July 20th, 2011 at 04:08am
  • Trig-ger

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    its amazing
    May 16th, 2011 at 02:49am
  • Krissy-Ann

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    Update soon pleaseeeee
    February 14th, 2011 at 08:54am
  • PhoebenPaige

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    *squeals* FINALLY! lol Loved the update I can't wait for more!
    December 27th, 2010 at 07:19pm
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    Loved it.
    November 29th, 2010 at 03:08am
  • Stab The Rainbow

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    I love it! Update. (;
    November 29th, 2010 at 02:49am