Fade Into You - Comments

Is this a oneshot or is it gonna be chaptered? 'Cause this is beautifully written, descriptive, and I'd definitely like to know what happens next, whether it's a happy ending or not. I love the last sentence; it's harsh, but it closes it out nicely. :D

This was so beautiful. It is so emotionally powerful because it's just so realistic. There are some excellent, poignant observations in here about what happens when you miss someone. I could really identify with how Olivia could remember almost insignificant details about Rush, but the rest of her was fading away.

The way that Rush's letter broke up the other paragraphs was a wonderfully creative way to show the letter to the reader, whilst at the same time showing the tangents of thought Olivia was going through as she read it. It helped to break these up and explained what had happened at the same time.

I hope to read the second part soon.

I just wanted to say,

1. I LOVE the summary background.
2. I just lovelovelove the plot. It's mysterious of all things. And I can sort of understand sorta. 'Cause my girlfriend lives in Oregon and I live in Illinois. Yeah. It's hard to describe.
and 3. This. Is just beautiful. I'll totally read more. I subscribed.

This is very well written I enjoy it a lot.
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