Shopping Till the End - Comments

This is really bittersweet, and very beautiful. :) I’m sure that Laury, like the friend she was to Selena, treasured the memories of Selena, and kept them with her in her heart forever. :) And I am also sure that when Selena’s classmates found out the real reason why she did what she did, they probably felt regretful about not being understanding to Selena, as well as wishing they had known about her terminal illness earlier, too.

Great story. :) I like it. Very well-written, too. :)

My bad, an edit to the comment: did should be didn't in the first paragraph. (mibba doesn't allow editing to comments =[ ) sorry about that dear!

"You DIDN'T break rules," is what it SHOULD say.

-You did break rules, which is good
-You had less mistakes than 20(also no points off here)
-You used the link and addiction in your summary
So as far as rule points go you get a perfect score!

Now onto the true commenting!!

1st off: I love the story's plot. A rish girl who truly deep down has an issues while others imagine she is spoiled and only in search of the recent designer fashions. I also loved your layout: very creative!
I love how she spends her years making room for the finer things in life like helping those less fortunate than herself. A very heart felt story, and quite sad that she died a month before her birthday.
I have only one problem about the story. I know that Shopaholicism can causes many things, such as: debt, relationship loss, bad credit, mental issues, etc. I would've like to know a much better cause for her death. But other than that a very fine story.