She Was Fading - Comments

  • always infinite

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    This story was beautiful.
    The love in this story was amazing.
    So many types of love, really.
    It's interesting how you managed to make the chapters so short, but yet they told everything that needed to be told.
    xo.
    February 24th, 2011 at 08:05pm
  • precursors

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    This story is wonderful. It's not really a love story, but it definitely holds love in it. Quite possibly the most powerful form of love: the love of a friend, and such a strong love that Caroline would give all her thousand wishes to Christian.

    This is just... amazing; it truly shows how one person can affect so many lives in so many ways.

    Great writing :)
    January 31st, 2011 at 03:45am
  • queenofapology

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    so beautiful. thank you so much for writing this.
    January 10th, 2011 at 10:17am
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    Adorable ending.
    January 10th, 2011 at 06:12am
  • Gurl

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    Excellent. <3
    January 9th, 2011 at 03:39am
  • SayGoodbye

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    This makes me cry in the most wonderful way. The story is magical.
    January 9th, 2011 at 03:30am
  • s m i l e;

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    okay wow. I knew this was going to happen.
    but i didn't expect it to be that abrubt
    or maybe i did
    but D: I feel like crying
    January 3rd, 2011 at 04:11am
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    I love this story. I really didn't expect to at first but it's just so blunt and to the point. It makes it that much better.
    January 2nd, 2011 at 11:27pm
  • Lifelines

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    This story is absolutely amazing and so sad. I love it :)
    January 2nd, 2011 at 08:58pm
  • Lifelines

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    This story is absolutely amazing and so sad. I love it :)
    January 2nd, 2011 at 08:58pm
  • Converse Addict

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    Lovely (:
    January 2nd, 2011 at 08:57pm
  • WelcomeToMyWorld

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    I've never come across, such a moving story.
    I normally don't like short, few sentenced stories as I always want more to read, but the dramatic effect of them, and the simplicity of them is incredibly perfect.

    I really hope you know how good a writer you are, I adore this story and at some points of this story, I was moved to tears.

    Beautiful, simply beautiful :) <3
    January 1st, 2011 at 03:19pm
  • TongueTwister

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    This is amazing.
    But I'm pretty sure you already know that.
    Normally, I would mind short chapters on a story. But with your story, it just clicks
    I love the plotline. It's so realistic, it truly made me ask the question 'Is this a true story' in my head.
    I know I'm silly.
    But, this touches a place deep in my heart.
    This is something I've truly thought about, and it makes me really take a step back and rethink Life.
    This story is truly poignant in its style, and creativity, and wisdom.
    I'm sure as hell subscribing to this.
    (:
    December 31st, 2010 at 06:47am
  • EnjoyTheSilence

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    oh no! I hate it when it ends when it gets good. I love your simple writing style, its great :)
    December 31st, 2010 at 05:57am
  • ninjaturtle-tori

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    Wow.
    I can't believe...well I can, but still!
    That sucks.
    But the story is still good. :D
    December 29th, 2010 at 10:02pm
  • xiluvmusicx

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    Awe! He doesn't know her name. But I feel like this is a pretty big turning point so now I'm on egde as to what happens next. Update soon please!
    December 26th, 2010 at 08:12am
  • rainbowpoop

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    It's honestly amazing the way you say so much in so few words.
    December 25th, 2010 at 08:10pm
  • electrovoid

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    This is so extraordinary and beautiful. <3
    You write in such a lovely fashion.
    December 22nd, 2010 at 04:59pm
  • ninjaturtle-tori

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    oh wow. This is amazing!
    December 21st, 2010 at 09:17pm
  • April Showers

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    I'm glad you're coming back to a piece of work to try and make it better. For me, I get tired of a story so easily, and then when (or if) I finish it at all, I end up just forgetting about it.
    December 21st, 2010 at 04:39pm