She Was Fading - Comments

I loved this.
Am I sad it ended? Yes.
But am I happy that it was written this way? Yes.
All good things come to an end after all. :')

Amazing story =]
I love it so much
Your a brilliantly excellent author =D

i absolutely loved this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cried!!! i had four more chapters to go, so i washed my face to calm down. then i realized it was useless cause i cried AGAIN.

oh my god, that was amazing, thanks for writing it, i loved it.

the ending sentence just put a smile on my face,

Amazing, touching, and heartfelt. Short, captivating, sweet and to the point. One of the best things I have ever read. You are truly talented and I applaud you for this amazing story of few words and much character. :)

AWWWW!!! I loved the story. I usually dont read stories like this that are short chapters but yours got me hooked. I would name the child Delilah and her middle name Caroline. I think it fits better. I think it was adorable how he started making paper cranes for her... .:) ::tear:: I am very sad that it is ending but i have a satisfying feeling.

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Is it okay if I name the baby Delilah in my head? Even if you might not mean the baby's name to be Delilah? 'Cuz I'm not sure on that part...
But I love the ending.
It was such a sad/happy/fulfilling story.
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<3

<3

AWWWWWWWW. :)
So Cute!
<3

So is her name Caroline, or Delilah?

Is that the end??
LOVE THIS STORY!
It is truly amazing =]

There are tears.

Turquoise ties for the win.
v.v
So sad.

Such an amazing story, it was truly great.

/dies.
NO.
NO.
NOOOOOO.
YOU DID NOT JUST KILL CAROLINE.
ME CREYS. :/
I wonder what's going to happen now.

you know i never cried before reading this story, because i'm just that hardcore
but i almost did this time....

This is an amazing story ^-^ I`m a huge fan

Awww!!! That was really sad.... I miss her already!!
I love this though!

i can't believe it either. i don't want to believe it.

Oh, my God. You killed her. That's it, I'm leaving.