Fucking Hypocrites - Comments

You don't need to edit. There might be a couple spelling mistakes, but who cares?
This is beautiful and true and emotional.

Okay. I get this. It's the ramblings of a girl about her issues and I love it. As is. Fuck editing. This is beautiful.

I adore the picture, firstly.

Last time my hair because greasy and thin and my fingers were beautiful and thin and my arms were boney and scary.
Firstly it would be "became" greasy. And I find it off how you're first saying how it went bad, called her fingers beautiful, and then went back to how it was bad. It doesn't fit.

And now I was shaking shaking shaking.
Commas between te shaking.

I'm a little confused though. How would starving herself on purpose or starving herself by accident have different effects? Either way, she's starving herself.

And you mention that her minds works against her, telling her not to eat most likely for appearance puposes, then she calls herself beautiful?

Otherwise, I think you've done a really good job capturing her emotions, her thoughts and all. I adore the last line "we let ourselves be fucking hypocrites."

I don't like how she changes her image and opinion of her self in the story. It's a bit too short for that so it just seems a bit illogical, she doesn't really have anything to cause herself to think differently.

Jeez. It's so...."ASDFYHFRT!!"
And I like that you kept it unedited because it would take awayfrom the emotion in it. I find that if I reread something one too many times, I'll change the most important parts.
I like how real it is, ya know?