Harry Potter and the Quest for the Holy Grail - Comments

  • Icamane Hatake

    Icamane Hatake (250)

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    So, I just gave up and I'm judging everything now Facepalm Shoot me later.

    I'm just going to go through the scoring thing and let you know how you did by that ^o^
    10/10 for grammar/spelling
    -I didn't catch any mistakes, except for the coding error, which really isn't grammar, so it doesn't count.
    8/10 for a readable layout
    -It was readable, but the boarders were a bit distracting, as was the font colour.
    30/30 for relevancy to the title
    -Completely relevant to the title -nod-
    40/50 for originality/creativity
    -This is also where I evaluate your writing. The inclusion of the Horcruxes was a really interesting idea and made the plot work wonderfully. It just seemed a little rushed and I wasn't too sure about how you made Harry and Ron's characters. Hermione was good though. And the idea of Harry and Ron adventuring in Egypt was an amusing thought.

    Overall:
    88/100
    October 4th, 2010 at 02:24am
  • crazy.beautiful

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    I found it amusing! I liked that Hermione was the one to find it, 'cause really, if that happened, she would be the one to do so (even if by accident). XD

    Also, about half-way through, one of your italics didn't work...you've a / before the first i.
    August 9th, 2010 at 07:18pm
  • Wishesarehorses

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    This. Is. So. Cool. I LOVE THIS ONE-SHOT!!! I can totally imagine Ron especially wanting to do this
    August 7th, 2010 at 03:09am