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Awww this is a really great story. I really like it. I'm gonna start reading the sequel now. (:

I really love everything about your story! I so well written and I really enjoy reading it! Now I'm up to read the sequel! =D Fantastic story!

Okay, so now that I've read this (and loved it, btdubs) I kind of like the sequel being in third person because then we see into Carmen and Dom's heads as well <3 those two are adorable!

oh my goodness, that was ahhhmazing (; i just wish we could have gotten a little more carmen & dominic... like after high school. but imma start the sequel and hopefully lyla & tristan's tory will be amazing as well (:

seeeeequel :D pleeease

You should definitely Do a sequel I love this story

I really don't comment much but I will seriously hunt you down and haunt you until you make a sequel. This story was so captivating, especially for me, since I grew up in the hood with not much to live for but the hope my family held and the support they gave me. Growing up a half Latina and half Armenian was really hard for me and I felt this story put some of the aspects of my life on blast. To say I enjoyed this or that this is my favourite story on Mibba would be a complete understatement. More than that, your style of writing is completely amazing and the amount of information you have about everything knowing that you probably didn't grow up the way I did makes me respect you so much more. I envy you, I really do. I'm sure you have a family and friends who support and love you til the end of time and I want you to cherish that because the people we love most, much like Davey, can be taken away from us at any given moment. Te quiero dar las gracias por una historia tan linda. Mantiene la fe y el amor. <3

i really think u should do a sequel

one of the best storys ever!!!
I love the way you write!
:)
you shuld do a sequel!
please:)

wow. i dont even know how to describe how i felt.
that was an amazing epilogue. and i absolutely loved your story!
perfect chemistry was a great book. one of my favs.
lol, i think you did superduper awesome on your version of it!!!
:D

okay there definatly needs to be a sequal, that epilogue made me want so much more and to find out what happends to everyone!

SEQUEL!!!!!!!!! C'mon you're not seriously going to talk about their son, him trying to help someone, then cut it off are you? That's just cruel and unusual!

I would personally enjoy a sequel to this one. You write beautifully and this story was just absolutely amazing.

YOU SHOULD DO A SEQUEL ABOUT TRISTAN AND LILA!!!! I would love that. I'm kind of sad this story is at it's end, but it was awesome while it lasted:')

Very good. Spent my morning reading it.

Most definitely a sequel : ]

Definitely****

I definietly definitely think there should be a sequel. I'm not one to comment, but I do love this story. ;3

SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL!!! hahah sorry..but if you dont write a sequal i will have to annoy the hell out of you till u do :) I loved that story (:

This was such a brillant story u did an amazing job:) u sould really make a sequal please:)