She Had Me At Bonjour - Comments

HUZZAH. YOU UPDATED!
I be very happy. (:
It made my embarrassing day ten times better. c:
YAY FOR YOU.
Anyway;; Jack is fucking epic. That's all I'm gonna say about him...
I promise.. I SWEAR. ...... maybe...

Aha, Krysha and Zack snuggling. That's adorable. (:
Oh and what Zack said afterward! AHAHA. I laughed.

Oh snapppp. Alex and Cree having a baby o:
SHAME ON HER FOR THINKING ON GIVING IT UP.
IT'S ALEX FUCKING GASKARTH'S CHILD! YOU DON'T DO THAT. >.>
Even if it isn't Jacks.. or Zacks... or well all those other hot people children..
OH SHOOT I MENTIONED HIM. I lied D; I apologize.

Anyway, update soon. :D

Baaaaailss..
I am 100% jelous of Krysha right now..
I mean she got to snuggle with Zack freaking Merrick :O >:[ Grr
Buut my darling biffle..
It was a great update and i love your writing xD
Update soon kitty ;D

I'm a bad commenter.
So here's a comment.

WHAT THE FUCKITY FUCK FUCK MCFUCKFUCK?! CREE IS NOT FUCKING PREGNANT!
Wait, she is?
O.O
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THINGS GOOEY AND DELICIOUS AND MONEY-FILLED WITH THE CRAZY CHOCOLATE BUNNIES THAT EAT BANANA BRAN MUFFINS THAT TASTE LIKE ORGANIC SHIT, DONT MAKE CREE GET AN ABORTION! IT'S ALEX'S LITTLE SPERM FUCKER THAT'S IN THERE. SHE CANNOT JUST KILL IT BECAUSE SHE DOESN'T WANT TO LOOK LIKE OCTOMOM MINUS SEVEN! PLEEEESE, LET THE LITTLE BABY LIVE TO SEE THE ADOPTION CENTER! BETTER YET, ZACK AND KRYSHA CAN GET TOGETHER AND PLAY HOUSE WITH THE LITTLE CURRENTLY GENDERLESS CREATURE! YEEEEAHHHH.

On the bright side, we be getting some spooning jokes going on. Speaking of going on, what the hell is going on? Who the fuck is this Connor/Conner/Whatthefuckever guy think he is trying to take Cree away? We get the Marcus and the Not-Krysha peeps taken away, but then this Connor/Conner/Whatthefuckever guy is sent from hell to ruin relationships. If we even get someone between Angela and Jack, I will kill them with a plastic fork from Miley Cyrus' "non-suspicious items to finger myself with' box. Trust me, I will make it HURT.

Great update Bailey! I loooved it.

OH MY GOD
PLOT TWIST LIKE YEAH
A;DJKF;AKLJFADFASDF
OH MY GAWSH
Y U BE PREGGO CREE
BY ALEX TOO.
KIDS THESE DAYS.
Lol who am I to talk?
Haha not that I got pregnant or anything o.o;
That's just weird. Lol
Well anyways, that was like a total plot twist! I didn't even know she slept with Alex xD
But yeah, I hope she doesn't get an abortion! Those things are the worst ever!!! And they're so sad :(
I say if she doesn't want it, she should just put it up for adoption or something. Do you think it will be that noticeable that she's pregnant? If not, she should do that. I think it's better, and the baby won't die! Ugh I would wanna see an Alex baby! Haha
But Krysha and Zack are like sososososo cute!
Awww! I really wanted to see that spooning going on ;D
But yeah, I bet Zack's arms would like crush her or something. Cause have you seen his arms! They're like the hulk! And his legs too!
And Angela and Jack were cute as always ;)
I love how they've never had problems in their relationship so far, and that it's going really swimmingly! Yes I said swimmingly! Got a problem? Lol
Yeah I don't like that Connor dude or whatevs.
I mean Cree is Alex's right!?
Ugh I don't know what's going to happen so you should update soon<3

awwww zacky and her spooning ;)
o_O baby gaskarth!

aww good old zack being a sweetie about it
like he is with eveyrthing, cuz hes that awesome :]
xD that made me laugh "runnng over your cat bad"
yes, zack, you do in fact love krysha ;]
haha someone slap me cuz i sound like a girl xD
hahahaha xDD cree! she cracks me up
Juliana! moment-ruiner! ughh whyd she have to do that?
Maybe Juliana has a point, but stilll
aww a girl named Ella cheated on him1 D: stupid ass girl
haha they're gonna do karaoke haha i love them xD
xDDDDD they're doing toxic and dedicating it to rian xD
yeah you are lieing through your teeth :/
update soon bailey!

superr cute!!
i think zack def loves her..at least i hope he does..:)
anywayyy great update soon <3 :)

haahah what @a-merrick-an said!!
but zack was so close to telling her!!!

Lalalaaaa love it ;D <3
I was like Grrr :| when Julianna interrupted them..
But seriously Zack is just the cutest thing EVER <3

i bet Juliana's just jealous, heheh mischief

AWW HOW CUTE!
Aw you Zacky, you can never say no to Krysha am I right? Haha
I think he loves her :)
That's so cute, but I hope she feels the same way!
Haha and my favorite part was the tik tac toe thingy and the toxic by britney spears. Lol I can't imagine it xD
Update soon<3

firstly, grr at chu, lucky duck for seeing ATL.
secondly, the picture is yummy, I would love to be a banana so I could say 'fuck yeah i touched an ATL members lips' or not, it's kinda weird saying that.
Zacky isn't in it much :(
Alexx is all jealous and mopey even if he denys it.
Angela and Jack = too cute :)
Marcus = LONELY LOSER :P
Keep it up yeah :D

This such a funny/adorable chap-STORY! OMFG I'M SO IN LOVE WITH IT. <3
DOUBLE BREAK UP BEB. Beat Marcus' ass. (; hahahaha

Daddy died? D: Sadface. I wanted to see some daddy scenes</3

I'm glad they both broke up though. I love how Delaney's all U CHEAT ON ME BTCH?! I NO LIKE U NO MORE. xD She's cool!
LMFAO. Making sandwhiches...Abba..Jack hahahah!
I loved that you mentioned my shortness. XD
I love the Julianna/Krysha talk :) Pick her up put her down strip her pick her up again evil laugh throws her to the pool. XD
CREE! ALEX IS RIGHT THERE MAN. STOP MAKING HIM JEALOUS. ;D We all know you're just hiding it. It's so obvious.

WAIT. Why is there not much Zacky action?! More next chapter then? WOOP!

N'AWWWWW. Thank you for the mention.<3 I LOVE YOU!
That picture...NOM I JUST WANT TO EAT IT NOMNOMNOM!
No seriously the bananas look delicious. ;)

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!
xxxx

you put me in the update, well my name ;]
your seeing all time low! you didnt tell me :[
have fun! ahh your so lucky!! id do anything to be there
Whoa, i almost forgot their dad was in a coma :[
HE DIED!! what! no DDDDDD: noooooo!
oh gosh, its not kara there though, i bet its her sister
and she'll catch them kissing or something
wow, im so fucking phsycic too! haha
but poor krysha, two blows in a day
haha they are just ike all happy to meet each other xD
oh cree's little boyfriend guy, alex is gonna be jealous
haha rian clapped xDD that made me laugh
haha they're like a support group
they stand up and tell everyone what is going on xD
just had to say that random fact,,,,
xD of course alex is mad, i really am phsycic
I love Juliana! shes so spunky and fun haha
aww Jack randomly going I HELPED! hes so cute
dudeee dancing queen is the shit! haha i love that song
oh gosh juliana just like yelling out xD
haha jack and her just ike scream across the yard
xD Kara would be worried about her dress haha
she just like stripped her dress off! dayumm haha
haha cute chapter bailey :]

OMGOMGOMGOMG<3
ADFJA;DFKJA;DKFJAD;F
I am freaking out right now. That was so funny, haha. I'm so glad they broke up! I MEAN DOUBLE BURN MAN!
Haha, stupid ass Marcus got his ass kicked! OH WHAT NOW!?
DOUBLE BREAK UP!
That's what you get for being an ass. I'm so glad he's outta the picture. If he shows up one more time, I will punch a cloud haha. I got that from Lights ;D
Well unless, if one of them is going to beat him up. That would be epic, and I would most certainly not mind that! WOOOOO!
Anyways, poor Alex! I'm so sad that he can't have Cree :(
Cree's so stupid, haha. It's so obvious he likes her. He was all mopey mopey! But towards the end, he was all like "OH YEAH I PUSHED YOU IN A POOL. WHAT NOW BIATCHES!?"
Lol so funny. And Jack too! Haha, aw. Angela making sandwiches? I can imagine that, she has the all the time!
And Jack singing to Dancing Queen? Oh hell yes, would I love to see that. That's amusing stuff right there. xD
Oh yeah, and I'm also sad they're Dad died :(
This is a sad time. I bet it's hard for them.
And poor Zacky! Krysha needs to talk to him. Since you know, she's single and all ;D
I wanna see some sexy time next chapter, LOLOL.
Oh yeah but anyways. I knew they were right! Update soon<3
And I looked at your Tumblr. Funny Funny stuff. Haha roller coaster picture!

Fuck fuck fuckity fuck fuck.
Now I have two chapters to comment on.

The first one I didn't comment on:
THEY APOLOGIZED!
THEY KISSED!
WHY THE FUCK DID SHE LEAVE?!

Second one:
YES! MARCUS/NOT-ZACK IS FUCKING GONEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
GONE LIKE THE FAWN AT DAWN!
OMFG, CREE YOU DUMBASS! WHAT ABOUT ALEX?!
Angela and Jack!(:<333
The picture!
Rawr. That's some sexy time right there in that picture(x<333

AM I ALLOWED TO KILL NOT-ZACK NOW?!
PLEASE?!
PLEASE?!
PLEASE?!
PLEASE?!
PLEASE?!
PLEASE?!
PLEASE?!
PRETTY PLEASE?!

HELLS TO THE YES, MARCUS IS OUT THE WINDOW! (:
That made me grin big timeeee.
I feel so bad for Cree and Krysha about their dad though D;
The update was overall a good thing though! (:
I can't wait for moree.

OMG! like seriously, OMG! i didnt think i was going to read the whole thing! haha i read like the first chapter and i was allike, holy damn, ITS GOOD! haha
I swear, i was getting so into it! like no joke, i was even laughing at some points, and it was weird having to explain that i was laughing at a online bookish thing, haha, but omg its really good!!!!!
I <3 ZACK MERRICK!!! ;)

Baaaails ;D
I love it.. i really do.
Its an amazing story xD
:O I CANT BELIEVE THAT YOU'RE SEEING ALL TIME LOW IN NOVEMBER! >:[ Grr at you
Oh well.. i guess i'll have to live ;D.. Maybe :|
Either way.. it was a great chapter and i cant wait to read the next one :)

awwwww i loved this chapter!!
Yay for both of them dumping that ass hole!
Awwww i feel bad for them! R.I.P. Daddy...
poor lex too!