She Had Me At Bonjour - Comments

Awwww they were gunna kiss as well :/ lmfao at zack's ring tone
haha gota love aqua lol keep goin this is really good :) xoxo

AHHH! Haha that last part was funny XD
I bet it was one of the guys who changed his ringtone, I don't think Zack would have that in the first place.. Or would he? Haha XD
And I'm betting you it's either Alex or his mom calling him, hahaha. Or it could be Rian..
Anyways, update soon! I wanna see who called him!
YOU HAVE GOT TO MAKE THEM KISS!

I happened to like this chapter!

They almost kissed! Yay[x
Who called him? Was it Alex? Jack? Rian? His mother?
I'm about to strangle whoever it was that called him. They totally killed the mood! They killed everything!
-cries dramatically-
Whhhhyyyyy?!

Fantastic update!(:

WHY DO YOU HATE THIS WITH A PASSION?!

I LOVED THIS WITH A PASSION!

Ohmagawsh. When they were about to kiss, I was at the edge of my seat!
THEY SHOULD KISS NOW. o___o
They know they like each other. >:)

I NEED MORE DEARY. :)
xxx

Ooooohhh.
What a lucky lady. If Zack Merrick dreamed about me...well, I'm going to stop right there with that thought and go onto a new one.

I love how interested he is in her even though she's just a fan he's seen a couple times. I love how the point of views switched though, too. Overall, I think this story is definitely going places and I'd love to see what else you have in store.

For the record, you don't need to feel lame or anything. I've never seen the full Titanic (somehow, the channel is always flipped right when the boat is about to sink) so I was convinced it was some horror film because I was young and a boat sinking is scary. Nevertheless, that was still my favorite bit of the chapter.

love it :) keep going this is really awsome :) xoxo

This is the first Zack fic I'm reading!

Girl, you got some amazing writing skills! Fo' serious!
Zack is such a cutie pie :3
That dream was delicious. XD

Moreeeee! :)
xx

Well better safe than wrong. I would have googled the names too. hehe

Like it. I love how she's a stuttering mess around him. Very cute. Also he dreams about her? Oh don't we all wish we were in his dreams. tehe

Great job with the update, I really like it so far! I love how you're doing it in Zack's AND Katie(I think her name, lol. I forgot)'s POV!
And you did a really great job in Zack's pov. Haha(:
Anyways, I love it so far. Update soon(:

It's nice as of right now(=

There's a ton of potential in this story and there are so many different directions this can go, so I'd really love to see where you could take it. For the first chapter, you've got me hooked and I'd absolutely love to see what you could do with this story. I love it(:

I'm likin this keep goin and I've subscribed too :)

I like it so far!
This is very well written, you're a good writer(:
I can't wait till she meets Zack again(hopefully)
Haha, so I'm definitely subscribing :D
Anyways, update soon! <3