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  • illlee123

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    I love the story :):P
    Please update soon :)
    December 11th, 2011 at 06:29pm
  • kissmyoops

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    You should lemme know who this is. I have a Wattpad & I like to keep tabs on who's a story-stealer. I'm so sorry that happened to you. Honestly, I would contact the Wattpaders and have them do something. They are usually more compliant than most creative sites. I know it's done with you, but that's not stopping her from stealing another story. I'm so sorry.
    Definitely reading on Inkpop<3
    November 30th, 2011 at 02:59am
  • MarriahShadz

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    So bummed that that happened to you and that you're deleting your stories but I understand.
    November 29th, 2011 at 05:29am
  • Dezi Demize

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    Chapter 27: So Elena went through all of that pain and suffering for nothing....I have a feeling that she's going to die soon.

    Update soon<3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
    November 20th, 2011 at 11:12am
  • The Colour of Music

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    That was so well written, that was intense.
    she just can't get a break, can she? Sigh.
    But I can't believe she killed two people. She has changed so much from the beginning. I honestly don't know whose side is "right". We are only hearing one side of this "war" type thing.
    anyway, great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.
    ^_^
    November 20th, 2011 at 08:51am
  • horserideraja

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    HA. THATS WHAT SHE GETS. HA.

    damn. that was intense.... i legit hold my breath in anticipation cause i cant wait to see what happens next <3
    November 19th, 2011 at 10:20pm
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    I totally found this story off someone's signature and i love it! Im subbed and i can' t wait for more! :)
    November 12th, 2011 at 08:55pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    Finally got a chance to read the update.
    I was smiling toward the end there. I can't wait to see what happens next.
    I wonder if Hero already knows that Elena got the SuperHero tech installed (I'm not sure if that's the right word) in her brain.
    Their first encounter should definitely be interesting considering I have a feeling that Hero won't be pleased with Elena like she thinks he will.
    November 10th, 2011 at 03:31am
  • ClaudiaBiedles

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    My god, Elena. You crazy, obsessive little...lunatic. I swear her and Hero have both gone insane. I'm expecting a twist may be coming up, hmm?
    November 8th, 2011 at 12:31am
  • kissmyoops

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    This can'tend well :)
    November 7th, 2011 at 03:41pm
  • The Colour of Music

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    I loved that chapter.
    Whoever I did notice a typo. "Something cold touched my face, forcing my right open. I jerked as a bright light shone into my eye. The torture was repeated with my other eye."
    'forcing my right open' doesn't make sense. I assume you meant right eye?
    Anyway. Amazing chapter and I can't wait for the next one. this has gotten so interesting! I am so glad that Elena is capable now.
    Please write more soon.
    ^_^
    November 7th, 2011 at 09:23am
  • Dezi Demize

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    Chapter 26: Honestly? I don't even know what to say now except that Elena is a total idiot!! >.<

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    November 7th, 2011 at 06:39am
  • eragorn122

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    I think it's brilliant! I love this story extremely well written the only thing that worries me is the dark place that Elena is in now. :/
    November 7th, 2011 at 06:23am
  • topless

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    EEEEEEEEEEEEK.
    SHE HAS THE TECH. IN HER. OMG.
    I want her to kick Hero's ass.
    Like, right nowwwwwwww. But, knowing you, she won't. Grr.
    I want him to feel BAD DAMMIT.
    Lovely update, I felt as though I had gotten the operation. Lol.
    You're wonderful.
    November 7th, 2011 at 06:22am
  • JayCaffrey

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    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
    November 5th, 2011 at 09:52pm
  • MissSexxiiBunnii

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    LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    November 5th, 2011 at 12:25am
  • The Colour of Music

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    She is Hero's mother?!?
    Did not expect that.
    I am kinda glad that Elena is getting the operation, I was getting sick of her not being able to do anything, you know? I just don't like useless main characters, I guess. :)
    Anyway, where do I see this story going? I honestly have no clue. Everytime I come up with a theory you make a twist or a turn that I didn't see. XD
    I love it. Not being able to see what will happen in a story is rare for me. Lol. So I am enjoying it. ^_^
    But I am a bit nervous about this operation. They could do anything to her.
    Please update soon.
    ♥♥♥
    October 30th, 2011 at 04:47am
  • hiwagang hapis

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    Oh fudge. You're awesome.
    October 29th, 2011 at 03:46pm
  • ClaudiaBiedles

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    Hmm, where do I think the story is headed? Well, I want myself to believe that there's a motive behind why Hero got rid of Elena. There's a reason I can and can't believe that Hero was using Elena this whole time. I can believe it because I'm thinking that he most likely thought Elena would be a good, smart "partner" of some sort to get the answers he needed. I can't believe it because I still remember that one secret group (sorry I can't remember what chapter they were from and I forgot who exactly they were) Hero always went to who practically worshiped him and saw the good in him, so maybe, just maybe, there really is some good in that psychopathic monster :).
    October 29th, 2011 at 05:52am
  • lil_angel666

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    I've got a bad feeling about this what if they implant a mind control chip into her brain while putting the hero tech in??? She could really go through with killing him then!!!

    *eyes widen* ahhhhh! now I'm freaking myself out update again when you can!!
    October 29th, 2011 at 03:56am