You know I do kinda grow sick of reading love story after love story on this site. Everyone has one and there's basically no plot besides these 2 people falling in love and being dreamy together. It's rather sickening. With that said, yours DOES stand out to me. I think it does because of the pure poetic view you took instead of just saying "he was dreamy." I like how you made the audience understand that without actually saying it. This one was different and I did enjoy it. Keep up the good work.
August 19th, 2012 at 07:46pm