August 25th, 2010 at 03:13pm
What an idea!
Your Harry, Ron, and Hermione were pretty out of character, and there were phrases there that they never would have used.
But because Dumbledore had a bright pink mohawk, i really didn't care.
Hahahaha. Oh, Ron…
“Dumbledore has a bright pink mohawk!” I seriously laughed out loud at that! Just that image…
Just as that little Creevey. He managed to snap a quick photo of it.”
Typical :D
“You practically go there everyday,” Ron said. “Just say your scar is hurting or something.”
“That’s not something to joke about!” Hermione exclaimed shocked. “That’s a very serious matter.”
Pretending that he didn’t hear Hermione, Harry agreed to the idea. “Sounds perfect.
Heehee. Hermione, such a worry wart!
With a twinkle in his bright blue eye, Dumbledore gave a hearty laugh. “Oh Harry, lighten up. Loosen up your tie and have some fun! Plus I’m taking you someplace special tonight.”
“Where?”
“To the local witch’s strip club!”
OH MY GOSH. I think I died laughing at that xD
You, Miss Eujenia, are a true genius. You really captured the personalities of all the characters and created the story without it seeming forced and faked.
You have a lot of talent. <3