Conversation Following a Shower. - Comments

Someone said you were Wonderland.

I wholeheartedly agree.

You are the personification of Wonderland.

Lovely and amazing. Why no more? Confusion? Contusion, I bet. Or, better yet, Delusions. I like those. Regardless, I do hope there is more. I always hope. Maybe he'll be ok. Maybe he'll have AIDs. Who knows?

This makes me wish I had a Wonderland.

Still, I'll survive living off the words from yours.

The thing I love most about all of these is that it's like every single line has significance. You read it through carefully and it has a complex thread of emotions that winds through the whole piece.

You have such beautiful talent.

I'm sorry, I don't have more to say. I'm terrible at commenting.

I like the mentions of the cereal and the blueberry waffles and how they connect to the times, or mark the passing of time, in a way.
I also like how Brendon and Ryan both move together to tell Dru about what's up.

My favorite lines:

"Let's go in the living room. I don't want to have this conversation in the kitchen."

She was crying before he pulled away.

Update.
Welcome Home, Part Two.

My favourite was the ending.
So perfect.
Just so perfect. Left to wonder, yet, really, it was all that needed to be said.
You're writing is brilliant Dru.
And you never cease to amaze me. <3

I always look forward to you updating this. :]

I personally think these are brilliant, beyond original, and such unique pieces of work, that i'm at a loss for words to describe them all.

They are all very beautiful, and I loved the latest update.

Welcome Home

My favorite lines:

Where'd you go?"
"Tomorrow."
"You went to tomorrow?" the girl mumbled, barely audible.
"Yeah." Ryan said with a quiet laugh. "I went to tomorrow."

Wow, this is really amazing. At first, I wasn't sure of what I was reading, but this is truely amazing. It made me think more then a lot of other stories have. I love the whole 'Wonderland' theme, it's absolutely amazing, you have so much talent. I hope you keep writing, I'll be sure to check out your other stories. Awesome job.

Updated.
Welcome Home.

druscilla; red tear.:

arianna. bad luck.:

What role did the Doormouse play? I don't remember him...

The Dormouse wasn't very important, actually. He just slept in the teapot and sang 'twinkle twinkle little bat'.

Maybe that's why I love him.
He has no importance.
Just like me.

Conversations in Dreamworld...
....There's so many of them.

It's brave of you to write them down.
<3

Wow, I'm not really sure what to say, but this, this is extremely good.
It makes my heart feel like it's being ripped out for some reason, there's just a lot of pain in this...
When I try to go to sleep, I think of this kind of stuff to help me vent.
And for some reason, these oneshots makes me feel less alone, I guess.
I just really like this.
(I probably sound like a rambling idiot right now =P)

Down the Rabbit-Hole

My favorite lines:

“It’s not coke.” Brendon said. “It’s powdered painkillers. They work faster if you snort them.”

“You can only get there by accident, Dru. Trying doesn’t make it any easier to get in.”

Wow.
Sometimes I feel like this.
Lost.
I guess you could call it lost, that's what it feels like to me.
No, more like dead than lost.

I hope Wonderland is all it's cut out to be.
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Anyway, this one was great. I liked the way you described how Brendon and Ryan are totally okay with everything and used to it. Pete's just like...new.
He doesn't know what it's like yet.
Hopefully (for him) it will get "easier".

I read both because they were rather short. I knew the song they were talking about...weird song. I don't know too much about Alice in Wonderland since I haven't watched it in a long time, so I didn't know who the Dormouse was. That's the only part that confused me.
Other than that, I really liked the last line. It was sweet.

In the second one, I only found one error:
It wasn’t that hard to find and you found it after about ten minutes. Ryan went in first and then you and them me.
^ I'm pretty sure it's easy to spot out.

Both were good. I really can't say anything else about 'em.

Updated.
Another Alice in Wonderland inspired piece.
Down the Rabbit-Hole.

This is incredible. You are a very good writer. I enjoy them ever so much.

This was absoloutely beautiful, because when you say dreams don't scar your arms, it's the truth. That says a lot, because nothing is the truth. Nothing but Dreamworld. I've lived there since I was a very little girl and it's the only place that keeps me from killing myself.

There's only one other thing I have to say:

I don't know you at all beside through your beautiful writings, but, Druscilla, you really are Wonderland.

arianna. bad luck.:

What role did the Doormouse play? I don't remember him...

The Dormouse wasn't very important, actually. He just slept in the teapot and sang 'twinkle twinkle little bat'.

So this is what goes on in your head, huh?

Well, the first one was...great. It was... not empty, just...uneventful.
It was lovely and well-written, just not much happened.
I still adored it, though.

The second was just...fantastic? No, it would be a better word than that.
All the relations between "real life" (as it is in the story) and Wonderland.
But, I haven't seen Alice in Wonderland for....a long time.
What role did the Doormouse play? I don't remember him...
Ryan seems cute. More or less cute than a good protector. I think protector would be the word....

Well, I couldn't expect any less from you, and it was fantastic.