SO! This just intense. She got shot!!!! -gasp- I hope she's okay! and I hope the bullies got punished too...stupid people. Thanks for the mention(: I love how this is written in such short chapters, leaving out details, giving the story some mystery. It's great! Keep updating! n_n
:) i finally got the chance to read your story (i've been super busy...its terrible)
i love it. I think that the shorter chapters leaves more of an impact on the reader and leaves them thinking with more. im really excited to see where this story goes.
one suggestion: maybe do a spell-check before you post? i've seen a few spelling errors in the chapters. just a suggestion :)
i wish you would write more in your chapters because even though its simple there isnt much detail some chapters could have been combined together but other then that i like where the story is going :)