Ten Zillion Fireflies - Comments

soooo gooooddd!!! more soon please <333

haha, they're absolutely hysterical. I love them all. :D

Cutting = bad :( Poor Maddie. I hope that things turn around for her very soon.
Awww, I'm glad that she has a friend and that she's working everything out. :) That letter was really sweet. I love how she talks... It's real. :)

I love the how deep this is, and how much she alludes to her brother instead of bottling him and everything about him up. They're quite the family.
Can we please somehow get rid of Cam? He's a jerk... and he's not helping.

“Because, I saw the way you looked at the sun.” David says.

^ My favourite line in that entire chapter. I like David. He's awesome. :D I'm soo happy that she's feeling better. :) Hahahaha, Cam deserved that one.

Okay... I'm seemingly content now. I'm glad that she's all right and that her therapist is a lovely person. It's nice to have someone to relate to, someone that you can talk to that won't judge you for anything.
I want Cam gone. If he knows then he should leave. Leave her alone because you're a jerk, if you didn't use her the way you did then she'd be all right. Idiot.
I don't like the mom really. Taking people away doesn't seem like the best therapy to me. Being around those that love you is definitely good... but somewhere she doesn't want to be with people that she doesn't want to be with?... doesn't sound like the best idea.

What?! just happenedd???????
And seriously, someone shoot that boy. He was all sweet and now he's just an asshole.
But serious... not okay... someone awesome should save her.

Please!!!! Finish!! :D!! <3

You did a really good job at making the characters actions, thoughts, and words seem realistic and believable. Really great keep it up![:

Awww, that was adorable at the end there. :)
Sorry I missed the last chapter!!! DX!!! But that was just horrible of those girls to say! XP! meanies! XP!

Aww, I love her!!! And I love her opinion. :)

Dear Best Friend,
I love your story. I keep checking and waiting for you to update! I'ts really excited and I'm really eager to learn Cam's story. Keep going, the story is amazing.

LOVE THIS
Can't wait for more <3

wow really good i like it emo but inspiring at the same time. i love it i do want to kno how her brother died but i only read the first 2 chapters

they held hands <3 :]
they went to his grave, oh jeez :[
they're looking through the room, i cant help but think there gonna find something importantly sad
Cam stayed the whole night! :] and made her breakfast :]
ahh i wanna know Cam's side as well! ugh
haha update soon!

this is so emotional and sad ):
i love it :3 though it is a bit confusing at times

Awww that was just adorable!!! XD!!!!
She's trying to move on? Wow!! that's amazing. :) I'm glad that Cam is there.
O.o!! that is quite the delimma. I hope that everything turns out well. :)

Great story love it.
Hope you would update soon.

I like where this is going(: i'm dying to find out how brendon died though...

Your story is very well written, it's deffinitly something I can feel myself getting caught up in, wanting to read more. Keep it going

I liked it! Some of the cutting stories are a bit...er...graphic. This one wasn't and since I have a super close brother, I could relate a little bit to the horror using my imagination. Her parents are mentally unstable, just sayin'! But I'll definitely follow this story!

Now my story? :D