That was incredible. And so, so terribly sad, my god. I just....It was almost painful to read; you did such a good job of portraying her desperation, madness, and heartbreak. I felt what she felt, I felt her pain. Oh god. I will never be able to tell you in coherent words how deeply this struck me. Although I'm not fond of so many line breaks, in this story, it just worked. And I was never quite fond of Rose either, but I just felt for her so much in this. It almost felt like little drabbles, strung together and out of time and in time. I would cry for her, except I feel so much more lost. So much more destitute. I want my Doctor back and I never had him in the first place. It's just...perfect.
This is the best Who fanfiction on the site, and I'm not kidding or over-exaggerating or saying it to make you feel good. It's the truth. Fantastic, fantastic job.
This is the best Who fanfiction on the site, and I'm not kidding or over-exaggerating or saying it to make you feel good. It's the truth. Fantastic, fantastic job.