Catch You - Comments

When I read the title, I was a bit puzzled on exactly how that would turn out... but I read it and had to giggle at the sweetness of it.
Also... sorry if I should've probably done mostly all this read & comment stuff, but I'm a busy girl... that's a bad thing if I'm already a stress-o-holic paranoid girl! :D
Anyway... love this short story and there's nothing I could possible see wrong with it... maybe except... well nothing. Haha. :>)
Now I wish for a guy like that. Haha. Thanks a lot! Another guy to dream about in my sleep! :D

Oh yeah, I missed one. In the same sentence in which you put thosE in. There's a 'havE'. x]

I was changing so much so fast, this was the last thing I had to do.
I know him, all the girls would kill for this opportunity.
You used 'the'. That has an 'e'.

I didn't want those girls who I couldn't stand to have a shot, though.
thosE

Pretty impressive though.

I found some letter E's. Would you like me to point them out to you?

But it was amazing for a story without the E's.