Bullet and a Target - Comments

aweeeeeeeeeeee!
god i love them as a couple!

That was so adorable that I may just have to vomit.

Wait...that didn't sound like a compliment at all.

Sorry, I've been spending too much time on youtube.

LOVED IT!!

love the update @D

Perfect. :)

Lovely writing and a lovely story

Can't wait to read more.

well worth the long wait. ANd Yay Patrick!! poor Joe :)

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love the update :D

beautifully written...there just word on a page,but so much better :)

i share the same theory about the world conspiring against me(:
i really, really enjoy their relationship and how it's progressing.

awwwwww :3

I love this it's so cute!

love the update :D

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those are good flailthings, really!

Anyways, opening the chapter with such negativity really made me think something terrible had happened with Bones and such. And then it makes such a turn around, it's adorable! Pete is so ridiculously smitten and infatuated, and he really does like Bonesies here for the right reasons. I approve XD

You're doing so well with writing this; please, don't start writing and jsut be doing it for coments. Don't change or lose what makes this story unique and great and enjoyable; a lot of the time, once an author starts writing just so they can get comments and collect them, they lose that special something to their story. You seem to be writing though so you can get a bit of criticism, which is always refreshing to see :3

Ignoring my little ~rant there, if Pete and Bones aren't together soon I think someone's going to spontaneously explode from the suspense! (potentially me, ofc.) How Bones seems so demure and just... I can't even find the right word for it - I almost want to say sexy or seductive or adorable or cute - but just how Bones talks and acts and carries herself is something else. It's unique and it's her; it's just her.

Great update; can't wait for chapter 13 :3

(ironically, minutes after I recc'd this story to someone, I get an email alert that it's been updated ~magical)

Oops! Sorry! I'm still infatuated with this story, but I really just don't have the time to leave long comments like I used to D:

So, starting from chapter nine, I suppose :3

I love how simple their conversation seems, how relaxed they are around one another even though I'm positive Pete is fairly nervous. I like how you throw in the little bit about tattoos, and then how he asks the big question in such a casual way; it was such a big deal to the both of 'em. The cliffhanger was brilliant and perfect and I love how Pete really thinks through what questions he should ask.

It may not be a long chapter, chapter ten, but it's very important, eh? It really opens up and tells you about the two; you have a writing style that reminds me of Dru at points and kunoichi. You have the ability to tell a wonderful story in just a handful of words, and that's something so many young authors just strive for, yanno?

In the middleish, how Pete sort of thinks sexually, reminds us that he is a boy. Granted, he may be a boy with a few issues, but he still thinks about sex and all those things that any other would. Pete's description aptly describes a lot of the users on Mibba, that they're always striving to be better when they'd be great if they just accepted themselves.

Bones and Pete must make the CUTEST couple ever. Reminds me a bit of Vone and Carolyn, a pair of kids in my band, except not as messed up, y'know?

That Pete's changed his nickname for Bones has me in a little puddle of mush. I'm gonna keep calling her Bones, though, I think. His reasoning on why he's calling her love and honey and all these coupley-pet names is very realistic; with my best friend, her nickname is Coco, but I'll call her what her real name is or a nickname that just I call her at times because I just want to be a bit unique and stick out to her, I guess. I don't want to be one of those girls she calls a best friend to another best friend, y'know? I dunno, that didn't really make sense.

A little factual thing; is this taking place pre-FOB? Is FOB going to be in this at all? If so, I'd recommend changing the little iPod thing to being an MP3 or a Walkman, 'cause iPods weren't around until about 1999-2001ish, I don't think.

AWWW I DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING IT'S SO ADORABLE OFSDKJLADFSNGKJDFSNGJDHDSFK
peteXbones there's not a better pairing on mibba, I don't think :3

I'm sorry that this comment really isn't up to my usual par; I'm at another person's house and I'm trying to relax a bit this weekend, y'know?

Oops! Sorry! I'm still infatuated with this story, but I really just don't have the time to leave long comments like I used to D:

So, starting from chapter nine, I suppose :3

I love how simple their conversation seems, how relaxed they are around one another even though I'm positive Pete is fairly nervous. I like how you throw in the little bit about tattoos, and then how he asks the big question in such a casual way; it was such a big deal to the both of 'em. The cliffhanger was brilliant and perfect and I love how Pete really thinks through what questions he should ask.

It may not be a long chapter, chapter ten, but it's very important, eh? It really opens up and tells you about the two; you have a writing style that reminds me of Dru at points and kunoichi. You have the ability to tell a wonderful story in just a handful of words, and that's something so many young authors just strive for, yanno?

In the middleish, how Pete sort of thinks sexually, reminds us that he is a boy. Granted, he may be a boy with a few issues, but he still thinks about sex and all those things that any other would. Pete's description aptly describes a lot of the users on Mibba, that they're always striving to be better when they'd be great if they just accepted themselves.

Bones and Pete must make the CUTEST couple ever. Reminds me a bit of Vone and Carolyn, a pair of kids in my band, except not as messed up, y'know?

That Pete's changed his nickname for Bones has me in a little puddle of mush. I'm gonna keep calling her Bones, though, I think. His reasoning on why he's calling her love and honey and all these coupley-pet names is very realistic; with my best friend, her nickname is Coco, but I'll call her what her real name is or a nickname that just I call her at times because I just want to be a bit unique and stick out to her, I guess. I don't want to be one of those girls she calls a best friend to another best friend, y'know? I dunno, that didn't really make sense.

A little factual thing; is this taking place pre-FOB? Is FOB going to be in this at all? If so, I'd recommend changing the little iPod thing to being an MP3 or a Walkman, 'cause iPods weren't around until about 1999-2001ish, I don't think.

AWWW I DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING IT'S SO ADORABLE OFSDKJLADFSNGKJDFSNGJDHDSFK
peteXbones there's not a better pairing on mibba, I don't think :3

I'm sorry that this comment really isn't up to my usual par; I'm at another person's house and I'm trying to relax a bit this weekend, y'know?

:D SOCUTE.

I loved it. :3

AHHHHH love love love love love it :D

I loved it! it's so beautiful.
I love how Pete decides to ask her name.
I love how her name is simple like his.
I love how he nolonger wishes to call her bones.

can you tell i loved it?

:] update soon!

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This is just excruciatingly beautiful ya know?
I'm completely and totally in love with this.
So her name is Danielle. I like it. I like it a lot.
Pete is just, ugh, he's perfect. And funny. And just, wonderful.