World War Tour - Comments

First thing, I want to apologize for how late this comment is. I meant to post this long ago, but it slipped my mind and just sat there forever. I would like you to know that this wait is not a reflection on your story.

I've read through the first few chapers and I think that you have a super fun story on your hands. It is the perfect read for, not only fans of The Maine or AAR, but for anyone who wants a fun story for summer. You have a pretty funny voice in your writing, pranks between bands always proves to be exciting.

That being said, I wish I knew more about your main character Kaylee. So far she seems the perfect to have along if someone wants to travel on a bus for a few months, but I want to get more inside her head. Adding some depth to your charactes is always good. At the same time, I haven't been through all of your chapters so some more development could be waiting for me there.

All in all, I think your story is a great read with lots of room to stir up the pot with adventure.

OMG, Update it! <3

Saw the short description that said "The All-American Rejects..' & I stopped reading & subscribed immediately! Once I read it... I don't regret it!

This seems pretty interesting :) Can't wait to see where you take it!