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  • Honeybear

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    That update was amazing.

    Maybe one day she’ll stare up into that cloudy sky, smeared across all she can see, and feel its comforting arms wrap around her, transporting her into a world whereeverything is beautiful and nothing hurts.


    I'm not sure if you were quoting MewithoutYou, but it doesn't really matter -- I just love that line.
    March 1st, 2011 at 04:18am
  • River Young;

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    I was in your author's notes! Yay! xD
    This of course was an amazing chapter! That's my thoughts when I remember to do my push-ups. lol Perfectly beautiful writing, m'dear!
    February 28th, 2011 at 11:59pm
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    AND SCORE! I was the first comment on the fifteenth page. Heh heh hehhh. :D
    February 28th, 2011 at 09:43pm
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    God, every single time I read one of your chapters, I never cease to be amazed at how good at writing you are. It's totally amazing. :D Keep it up!
    February 28th, 2011 at 09:43pm
  • Caravaggio

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    This entire chapter was written so beautifully. The metaphors and the imagery had me completely transported to some distant world of fantasy.

    She wonders if she’ll ever be inspiring, she wonders if her words will ever mean anything, she wonders if everything will ever be worth it. <-- Something I ask myself every day.

    Great chapter. Absolutely brilliant.
    February 28th, 2011 at 03:31pm
  • NaiveDove

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    i love ur insight into her mind (:
    February 28th, 2011 at 12:26pm
  • SkyLyte

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    Cool update. Monica wants to be inspired to exercise more? Man I feel so fluffy inside when I see my name in bold print. Ka-pow. Thank you!
    February 28th, 2011 at 06:34am
  • topless

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    Another wonderful update. Jeez, that left me breathing hard. I love this story. <3
    February 28th, 2011 at 05:22am
  • Mimi.

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    Your story is incredibley amazing! I really love it, great job!
    <3
    February 28th, 2011 at 04:43am
  • MarmaladeK.Gnome

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    :O love this chapter! i love how you word out her way of seeing inspiration, and her need for it... Love this story!
    February 28th, 2011 at 04:23am
  • HAIFISCH

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    Cool cool cool now.... give me more!
    February 28th, 2011 at 04:19am
  • nikkirad

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    Tawww I lik tht, she wants to better herself and be happy...good for her :)
    update soon! ^_^
    February 28th, 2011 at 04:04am
  • EverRose

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    So it's official; Penguins can fly, humans can lay eggs, you're an amazing writer, Michael Jackson came out of hiding, this is my favorite chapter by far, Nessie came out of the closet-er water, and pigs can fly.

    I adore your wording here, woman! Stop being so awesome! Maybe I should go to Canda and on a flying pig/penguin and rub your belly for some of your awesomeness. D}:<

    I'll be your screamer person thing dude!!!
    February 28th, 2011 at 03:37am
  • akwardshygirl

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    This is honestly possibly one of the best stories I have read on Mibba. Seriously. This is awesome. Don't stop!!!
    February 28th, 2011 at 03:34am
  • pink tape

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    This was lovely (:
    I loved the description of how much she wants to be inspired (:
    February 28th, 2011 at 02:39am
  • Honeybear

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    I need an update, now! This story is very interesting.
    February 27th, 2011 at 10:26pm
  • dig up her bones.

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    psht, I meant I don't relate to her at all, but it's good to see a different story. (:
    February 16th, 2011 at 12:00pm
  • dig up her bones.

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    THIS IS AWESOME, I TELL YA. ;D
    February 16th, 2011 at 12:00pm
  • ovaries;

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    new reader :)
    and i simply adore this story. :D
    February 13th, 2011 at 05:10am
  • Icamane Hatake

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    I like Monica's burst of confidence :) It's a good balance to the darker chapters. And James talking to her was like In Love to me, it was cute.

    Just something I noticed as I read this update, but unlike most stories where it plays out like a movie in my head, for some reason when I read this story, I picture everything through Monica's eyes. It's very interesting, and I like it.
    February 12th, 2011 at 05:39am