I loved the overall concept of your plot. It's incredibly amazing, well-written, interesting, and definitely something that you don't read everyday.
The story flows beautifully. The descriptions of the character and the person to whom she is writing are stunning. I know they're not explicitly there, but you can read between paragraph, imagine them both, imagine how their relationship is like based on a simple letter.
What draw me in the most, was the whole not mentioning of names; the me and you structure you used that helps the reader get into the writer of this letter's shoes. It sucked me in and I was the one who wrote this. And the you was the boy I like, and I was terribly sad and confused, which I suppose are the feelings that the letter evoked.
You have an amazing way with words. I absolutely loved it.
I loved the overall concept of your plot. It's incredibly amazing, well-written, interesting, and definitely something that you don't read everyday.
The story flows beautifully. The descriptions of the character and the person to whom she is writing are stunning. I know they're not explicitly there, but you can read between paragraph, imagine them both, imagine how their relationship is like based on a simple letter.
What draw me in the most, was the whole not mentioning of names; the me and you structure you used that helps the reader get into the writer of this letter's shoes. It sucked me in and I was the one who wrote this. And the you was the boy I like, and I was terribly sad and confused, which I suppose are the feelings that the letter evoked.
You have an amazing way with words. I absolutely loved it.