What Do You Want From Me? - Comments

Hey. Great story. Comment swap brought me here. I don't necessarily read Avenged Sevenfold stories. But inguess that's the beauty of this, being exposed to things you normally wouldn't read. I haven't read the whole thing yet. But I do like what I've read so far. Keep up the good work and post more soon. :)

Hey. Great story. Comment swap brought me here. I haven read the whole thing yet but i do like what I've read do far. Keep up the good work and post more soon. :)

This is a good story! my mind was able to imagine the story and I felt like I was apart of the story itself. You are a very talented writer and your plot is very solid!!! I also love how much you put into your characters. They all have a personality that seems legit!(:

Before reading this story, I had no idea who Matt Sanders was, so this was a lot like reading an original fiction story for me. I think your summary was perfect and really attracted me!
I think you did a really good job executing the plot because a lot of times I see stories that are all over the place, but yours wasn't!
I don't really like the black background on the layout, but that isn't really a big deal.

Before reading this story, I had no idea who Matt Sanders was, so this was a lot like reading an original fiction story for me. I think your summary was perfect and really attracted me!
I think you did a really good job executing the plot because a lot of times I see stories that are all over the place, but yours wasn't!
I don't really like the black background on the layout, but that isn't really a big deal.

I'm just absorbing this story- I don't even realize how much of it I've already read. Your writing style is very easy to read and understand, and the grammar is really good. Jess is a unique main character, but the annoying jock boyfriend could come off as being over done. I don't think so, but some readers might take it that way. Over all this is a good story and I hope you continue with it.

Gorgeous layout, to start with. And its obvious you have put your heart into this story and it shows in your writing. I love the style, and the characters are amazing, very developed and strong, despite their troubles. I can't wait to read on, you can count me as a reader.

Ok. So I read this story before...I can't remember what chapter I left off when I stopped reading it, but I just reread the whole story.

I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!!

I just wanted I say: this story is amazing. I love your writing style - its unique and fresh. And Jessica's character has very good characterization, as well as her parents, Jason and Isabel.

I giggle uncontrolably at the Synacky and Jim/Johnny love. Wasn't expecting it, but it is nice. And I'm feeling actual anger and frustration at Marlene and Jeffery. Right now- I hate them. Hell, I hated them when they were first introduced. I'm just waiting for Jess to turn 18 so she can tell them to fuck off.

(Sorry if my thoughts and words are scattered - my brain is tired, but I just has to leave a comment.)

I paused in chapter 3. I'll continue reading when I have time, and I can't wait to finish it. By the way, you did a great job in portraying each scene fom the story. I'm excited to read more about the romantic parts of the story. :)

I paused in chapter 3. I'll continue reading when I have time, and I can't wait to finish it. By the way, you did a great job in portraying each scene fom the story. I'm excited to read more about the romantic parts of the story. :)

I paused in chapter 3. I'll continue reading when I have time, and I can't wait to finish it. By the way, you did a great job in portraying each scene fom the story. I'm excited to read more about the romantic parts of the story. :)

So managed to stumble across this and just read the whole thing in one sitting. I LOVE IT. You're such an amazing writer! I can literally imagine everything happening, it's so realistic. And the relationships everyone has is perfect. I admit, Brian and Zacky being together was a bit weird, but they crack me up so it's all good now lol. I'm looking forward to the next update

I can't wait to see what happens next. :) I really love this story even though it's a little weird imagining Brian&Zacky being in a relationship and also the fact that Jimmy isn't as close to the guys but regardless it's a great story so please update soon. :D

New reader~
If I were Jessica, I would've ran away, or would've went to the police. Maybe both. I have a feeling something is going to come back and bite her parents, Jason, and Isabel in the ass, hard.
Update soon?

I just wanna slap the shit out of Jason and Isabel. Absoloutly loved "The Joker-esq smiles they were sporting quickly dropped to grimaces once they saw the fading, yellow tinted bruises marking Jessica's body. It was her turn to smile, now." and "What did they think Jeffrey was going to do; scold her and send her to her room?" Just Argh made me laugh the shit outta myself in like the sadest way possible.
Loved the sly Synacky and Jimonny in there and both the couples being so cute.
Alos loved the way that both Matt's and Jess's home lifes are so simmilar but equally so different at the same time and the fact that brian is a 'richie', that term alone made me crack up. sorry just thought i would get all my love out in one go on this story, so until next chapter, Adios Amigos.

Ok can I just say that I am stupidly happy that this was updated! I absolutely love this story! I can not wait for the next one.

This story is really amazing :D can't wait for another chapter XD

Awesome.

I love this story!
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