Broken Glass - Comments

  • I like your rabbles! I thought I'd comment on them. :P

    I love how your work is so understandable; I can relate to this and it's thought provoking. I don't know what to say about this exactly ... in my point of view, it's a test in life. It's beautiful and yet sad! Aw. I love your choice of words though. :)
    September 8th, 2010 at 12:58am
  • I liked this and it held a fair amount of emotion for such a short story. You went into detail with it and you gave the readers a couple of reasons as to why the character felt like broken glass, I liked that too. You hear the crunch as you step on me, and laugh as I'm broken down even more then I should be. At first I thought the story was in first person, but this kind of changed the point-of-view for me, but I've done that before and I couldn't tell whose point-of-view it was in XD The first sentence after Broken glass. was a bit redundant to be honest, but it's not anything big, I guess. I liked it though.
    August 29th, 2010 at 11:42pm
  • How does this have no comments?
    And if someone comments before me, then I'll look stupid. xD
    For 100 words, this held so much meaning to it.
    The feelings were pretty raw and described well.
    I do feel like broken glass.
    I think everyone feels like it sometimes.
    You hear the crunch as you step on me, and laugh as I'm broken down even more then I should be.
    Pretty true; pretty epic; pretty genius. ;D
    Wonderfully done. (:
    <3
    August 24th, 2010 at 08:23pm