I know this has been up for a while but it's honestly just hilarious and silly and I think it's kind of great. I just love the whole ridiculous aspect of the whole thing. I mean it's like all of the crazy stereotypes and you know, everything in one story. I love it. I haven't actually gotten a lot into it, just the first few chapters but I need to finish it up now that I see there's a sequel. (I don't think it has any comments yet, I kinda wanna go comment on it right now.)
I hope it's as silly as this one, and I honestly can't wait to read it but nice job.
Haha. Okay, so I actually listen to some of these bands, love MCR and A7X and stuff like that, but I'm not any kind of emo and I love a good parody. Got this on comment swap (well, actually the second one, but I wanted to read the first before I got into that one) and it's made me laugh so fucking hard. XD And probably even more because I actually love those bands and shop at Hot Topic and crap. Also love the Little Mermaid. XD So this is totally awesome. You actually made a few mistakes with regard to bands and I could totally help you fix it if you wanted. Totally hilarious. Hehe. Keep it up! :)
Hello there. :) Well let's get started, shall we? I haven't laughed with a story so much since forever. Stories like these are rare on mibbaland. I just loved the characters you created and how you named them. I like the whole plot and the descriptions were pretty good. This was well written, congratulations. XD Keep up the great work and share your imagination with me and your fans. XD
Brought here by Comment Swap: I laugh so hard I think I almost peed myself. I love the title and when I saw it I immediately knew it was a parody and was like "Finally!" I loved the Little Mermaid twist and it is really well written with good description. I'm so going to continue to read this.
I haven't even read past the first two paragraphs and I know it s going to be funny already! "His teeny, tiny bleeding heart.." FUNNY! This is just...Eric's attitude is so funny! And I love the title! I usually don't read stories with emo characters because they're usually super depressing. But this is full of awesomness! I love how the Kings name is Constantine but his wife's name is Bess. Ha, a fat girl's name...I always thought it was a cows name...XD
This is hilarious. I've only read the first couple of chapters, but it's really good - I haven't come across any other stories like this on Mibba. I love how you're mocking all those typical, cliched stories, and I think you've done it really well.
I'm to scared to read the story. I will say that i loved you're summery. But I wont read anything with Emo in the title or cutting as a tag. But i really liked about the summert is the comedy to it. I hope that i come across one of your stories i will read. ~From Comment swap
omfg this is classy. i love a good slice of satirical comedy (i've written a comedy ryden taking this piss out of fanfiction before) and this is genius.
i'm only on the start of the second chapter but i can't wait to read the rest of it. my favourite bit has to be the vampirefreaks mention. i used to have one of those and i'd completely forgotten it even existed! <3
Hello from comment swap! I unfortunately never read any of the stories that were considered 'emo' or know much about what they are into. So I feel like I am missing out on some of the jokes; however, from the ones that I get, your story is really hilarious! I appreciate someone finally exposing the ridiculousness of these stories in such a funny and unique way! Nice work and great creativity! (:
This was hilarious. OMG! I'm still laughing. I just saw the title and I was like, "I'm on this." This is great. Very original. I doubt anyone will be trying to take this one from you.
this day was going to suck Mikey Way’s balls.
Honestly, you made my day with this story. This is really funny.
“But it’s not from Hot Topic,” Eric whined.
I'm subbing, that's it. I'm subbing. This is epic. I'm going to print this out and get on a helicopter, throwing it to the world. No, I'll become an astronaut so I can throw it from space.
By the time the first chapter ended, I was in tears. Oh Gawd. OH LAWD! Seriously, this story reminds me of Quizilla.
he knew this day was going to suck Mikey Way’s ball. I died. Honestly, I did. Oh gosh. Throughout the whole chapter I was dying and crying and just....oh God. I can't breathe. I can go on and on saying how funny this story is. Maybe I'll come and read it every time I'm upset :3
I really enjoy satires, so this is great. I don't know how you found every singe sterotype I've ever heard and more, but it was hilarious.
If I these characters were real and I met them...Ugh. I'd lose my mind. I feel so bad for the king in chapter one. I like how everyone except the emo prince and princess know how insane the prince and princess are. I like how exaggereated everything is. These character's ability to at the same time hate themselves ("No one loves me. I should just die") and be extremely arrogant ("They just don't understand me. I'm too unique") astounds me.
“My life sucks. It's a black abyss...” I thought I was going to fall out of my chair, I was laughing so hard. The entire time I was reading this I was thinking, "Please, try to be more overdramatic. I'm begging you." If it gets to the point where I want to talk to my computer I know it's a great story. I don't think you missed a single stereotype and it's only the second chapter.
This story is great and actually kind of scary because I've heard so many annoying people say the exact same things. That's probably what makes it so funny.
The citizens in Belfry amaze me. If I were them, I'd be leaving in hordes. The thought of being ruled by him scares me and this isn't even real. They'd probably have to listen admiringly to his horrible songs and hope for the moment when he'll put his guitar back into the case with the my little pony sticker.
Your chatspeak...there are no words to describe it. It's fun trying to figure out what it means, but for all I know it might as well have been written in latin.
The emo prince and princess's need to constantly scream makes my ears hurt in sympathy for everyone who has to listen to them.
I enjoy your inserts into the story. "Because amateur piercings are in...?" is probably my favorite so far.
"A totally loud sputtering sound came from the ocean, accompanied by major splashing" Somehow I don't think that's the way Ariel and the Prince's first meeting was in The Little Mermaid. I have to say that I prefer this one. Disney channel is probably going to tar and feather you for this story.
Manley just became my favorite character. I feel bad for him though. The emo prince must have been bad enough and now he has the princess to deal with too.
Eric could never change into someone worth dating. If possible he was even creepier when he was engaged to Ursula than Anorexia Ariel. Anorexia Ariel is the worst name I've ever heard by the way.
I don't think I've ever hoped for the main characters to die in a story before. I'm kind of disappointed that they didn't, but I can always hope in the sequel.