False Pretense - Comments

Just started reading and I love it. Casper and Jaimaeh remind me of what I had with someone. I don't like her father. I get if he didn't love her mother anymore but come on seriously on the day she died that's messed up

Yayy!!!!!!

SO GLAD THAT YOU UPDATED! I love it, I totally forgot about this story for a while until I got the email about there being another chapter. I could make you a layout if you want. :3

Loving it!

Hey Bess Frann....I loooove this story! It was pretty amazing as usual!

i loved it :}

O.o an update! :) lol

Loving the story!! Cant wait to read more awesomeness chapters!!!

Aww they are so fucking cute!

To be honest, I totally forgot about this story until you updated, but I'm glad because that was awesome, hope to read more soon! =D lolz

I love it :D
They are so adorable.
I'm sorry about your misfortune at home :(
If you ever wanna talk, I'm here :)

Yay! An update! That was good. =]

i love this so much. (:

Aw
Zee is just too adorable.
I love this

please update soon because you've got me wanting more!!

Zacky & Jadey together foREVer!!! Update Soon XD

Zacky & Jadey together foREVer!!!

haha, Zacky's lazy. :3
I loved the chapter.
Please update soon.

Dear Bess Frann...
We need to hang out soon...I'm hungry.
You're update was AHHHH-MAAZZINNGG...I can't wait for the next part because you're amazing and I know it will be too! I'ma text you now...LOOVEE YOUUU BESS FRANN

wow, i thought she would find 'weird things' since she picked zackys room up, can't wait for more! lmao