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  • hiyaitsjackie

    hiyaitsjackie (100)

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    this really was amazing, i literally am at a loss for words.

    now that ive gotten myself together, this was fantastic. the words flowed together
    making this sound like a song or poem.
    it was beautiful and i love the message that it sends out.
    i have knew males with eating disorders as well and i would also like to get out that
    it [big]does[/big] happen.
    its sad to think about, but im really happy you wrote this.
    i for sure will be reading the original
    thanks so much (:
    September 11th, 2010 at 05:28am
  • roux.

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    Yay!

    Reviewed as requested

    Title - Empty
    Extremely, extremely relevant.
    I like this very, very much.

    Rated: 10/10

    Layout & Banner
    The distorted face, the television screen. Major points for that.

    Rated: 20000/10

    Content
    The mirror says your beautiful.
    ^you're

    Wrists.
    Collarbones.
    Ribcage.
    Hipbones.
    Spinal cord. All prominent, all razor sharp, all mimicking that of a wild, savage animal.
    What have you done to yourself, Hollow Eyes? Do you feel empty enough yet?

    ^Gaaahh!!! alkjasdflj lsjfsdlfjaslfkj
    I cannot get over how much I am in love with this story! I really can't!

    I'm sorry that this is as detailed as my review can get but the story's just perfect!

    Overall
    Rated: 656453400000/10

    Yes, I like it that much. :)
    September 1st, 2010 at 02:40pm