September 11th, 2010 at 05:28am
Yay!
Reviewed as requested
Title - Empty
Extremely, extremely relevant.
I like this very, very much.
Rated: 10/10
Layout & Banner
The distorted face, the television screen. Major points for that.
Rated: 20000/10
Content
The mirror says your beautiful.
^you're
Wrists.
Collarbones.
Ribcage.
Hipbones.
Spinal cord. All prominent, all razor sharp, all mimicking that of a wild, savage animal.
What have you done to yourself, Hollow Eyes? Do you feel empty enough yet?
^Gaaahh!!! alkjasdflj lsjfsdlfjaslfkj
I cannot get over how much I am in love with this story! I really can't!
I'm sorry that this is as detailed as my review can get but the story's just perfect!
Overall
Rated: 656453400000/10
Yes, I like it that much. :)
now that ive gotten myself together, this was fantastic. the words flowed together
making this sound like a song or poem.
it was beautiful and i love the message that it sends out.
i have knew males with eating disorders as well and i would also like to get out that
it [big]does[/big] happen.
its sad to think about, but im really happy you wrote this.
i for sure will be reading the original
thanks so much (: