The Wrong Lust - Comments

<3 trevor yummmmmmm i love the new guys screw her brothers if they just wanna leave her like that

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
She finally got to (to put it blunt) fuck them both! LOL
And they did it in a club in the back room! X3
Kinky!
I am not sure how I like better right now but I would say that I like Vincent.
So now she has found two guys that replaced John and Johnathan and I bet they won't get tired of her because she has a wild and dominant side to her which probably turns them on even more!
She really is possessive isn't she? Telling them that they belong to her now.
I can't wait for future chapter to what will happen to their family now that everyone has someone else to occupy their time instead of each other now.
This chapter is very good and shows how Jane is finally moving on from her brothers, to experience a new life style than she had all those years with her brother.
I can't wait for the next update and hope it'll be soon!!!!!!!!!!!
I also enjoyed your new story too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really do like it. It's almost like she's replacing her brothers but in a different way she isn't, ya know? But she seems happy with them, like she's not just using them. And John and Jonathan seem fine with THEIR partners, but I just hope that the 3 J's will be okay with each other <3
Wonderful update, thanks so much, keep 'em coming =D

This story is.....different.
But it's a good different.
I was devastated when the trio started to break up, but it obviously was going to happen sooner or later. As for Jasmine, I strongly dislike her with a passion. Not just because she took John away from his siblings but because she's causing all of the siblings to seperate. If she never came in the picture, those 3 would still have their undenying love for eachother. Once John got with Jasmine I immediately wanted Jane to find someone. She's my favorite character, and I would hate for her to be waiting in the shadows watching her brother, she needs some entertainment also. Vincent and Trevor came though, thankfully. I'm feeling Vincent more then Trevor for some reason. Although I really don't know either of their personalities in details, I still like him more. Now, as for Ryan and Jonathan, I think that their is relationship is adorable BUT he should tell his sister. Later on things will be even more complicated if he don't. Overall I think I like all of the couples except for John and Jasmine, I just don't like those two, but I'll get over it. You're an amazing writer and I can't wait until the next chapter!

I loved it :D I think it was great, actually <333 Update soon pweez! <333333333333333333

YES! Go Jane!! loves it!

It's too late for them to start worrying about Jane now, she is completely broken now.
Too bad from them, now they realized how that affected Jane because of what happened to her when she was a child.
So now Jane is masking her pain so that her brothers won't have to worry about anymore.
I don't think that's a great idea because it'll become too much for her that it'll come out all at once.
Man Jasmine is one blonde bimbo, she should know that's what comes with the territory when working in a place like that.
I swear Jasmine makes me want to hit my head against the table with her mary sue personality and what makes her think that Jane would open up to her!?
She stole John away from her and now she wants to console just because John's her older brother, wow she has head in the clouds for way too long.
HA in his face, now she is giving Johnathan to look she gave John when she found out that she can't keep him.
I wonder how the both of them will react to Jane's change in personality and that she left with the two guys she met at the clubs.
I love how Jane is taking everything so calm but she is also dying inside.
But at least she found someone else that could help move on from her brothers.
UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!
I will check the story out right now!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

this chapter gave so much emotion, just wow.

i love this story but im pretty pissed at the brothers i mean how can they just forget about jane like wtf

Holy crap! I love this story so much, you don't even know! Keep writing! <3
Much love <3333

I love this chapter except for the part with the pervy dude..
It's good John realized what he can't have anymore
and I am so proud that Jane realized she can stand on her own without needing help from her brothers

LOL OMG I can't believe John would think after all he did?!
Man he pisses me off, now he finally feels what it is like to have your sibling lusting after somebody else.
In your face JOHN!!!!!!!!!!!!
Man he really thinks that he could go back into Jane's heart after how he broke? What an egotistical bastard!
Yay those two came back and are now waiting for Jane! I feel so happy for her!!!! XD
Man I know John will furious that she found some else but I am not sure about Johnothan though, he seems like the type to take things calmly.
I wonder if he is already figured out that Jane met someone or someones!
John has no right to say that Jane and Johnothan belong to him since he was one to destroy their family by going with oblivious bimbo, Jasmine.
It is true the only way he can gain back his sibling is if he gives up Jasmine and I don't see that happening any time soon.
Man their father is fucked up, so he was the one that destroyed Jane's innocent? I really hope someone happens to him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow so now Jasmine finally realizes that she lost her two brothers for good and now she needs to stand on her own now, since they aren't there to protect her anymore.
I wonder how they will react to Jane's coldness since she was the only one trying to hold the family together, she is finally giving up the on the hope that she will get her brothers back.
She finally broke.
Now I wonder who will help put the pieces of her heart back together.
YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
I look forward to your new story so post it soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDDDD

I would definetely read a new story. I freakin love this! Hope you update pronto can't wait to see their reactions

Heck yes! I would definitely read your stories! (:

loved it!!! Jane's a bad bitch lol

hmmmm, is John starting to regret the decision he made? Is Jane going to stop the relationship with her brother so she wont be heartbreaken? Will Jonathan and Jane both found out eachother secrets? All the questions going through my head when i was reading this chapter... LOVE this story<3 probably one of my favorites(:

Every time I read this story, I fall in love with it over and over again!

that just pisses me off :-(

looks like they wont be together much longer
that sucks since they depend on eachother so much

Woah now I officially hate Johnathan!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well you coulda of gone the chapter with the sex between Ryan and Johnathan.....
I know for sure the secrets that Jane and Johnathan are going to tear the apart and that will be end of the relationship they had all their life.
Now I really can't hate Ryan I don't why but I still have hate for him because like Johnathan said something coulda have happen to Jane while he was having the "most amazing sex with Ryan".
Johnathan should tell Jane his dirty little secret before she finds out the hard way because at least she will have some will to move on.
And Jane should also tell her secret because she could make her brothers jealous! X3
Man this family is falling apart right in front my eyes!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't wait for Jane to finally move on and I know it will kill her to do so but at least she will have someone other than her "brothers" cherish her.
I HATE JASMINE, JOHN, JOHNATHAN AND RYAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JANE DOESN'T HAVE ANYONE except for those two gorgeous men she met at the club.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!