Don't Knock It Until You've Tried It - Comments

Oh, and I want to add one more thing to that comment. I think that it says a lot about the man if he is willing to go to such great lengths to be there for his woman. I thought it was very romantic that they ran away together, and hopefully they'll have a better life than she and her husband did. No need to try to pick up the pieces of a broken marriage.

When I clicked on this and saw Billie Joe, I was like, :DDDDDDD, finally someone who shares my taste in fan/original fiction hybrids inspired by Green Day. (By the way, King For a Day was playing in my head pretty much the entire time.)

Anywho, this is very unique as opposed to most plots. Stories involving broken marriages are relatively commonplace on this website, along with cheating, but I have never before read a story where the secret lover disguised himself as a woman in order to gain access to his mistress. What's even more intriguing is the fact that he was able to pull it off. I don't know about you, but if I were that woman's husband, I would notice the difference between a woman and a dude in drag. Maybe that just goes to show how little attention he pays to his wife.

Loved the writing style, good imagery, and I didn't catch a whole lot of grammar mistakes. Thanks for a really fun read :).

I really like the layout on this. The colours are nice and they go really good together. The chapter itself was really nice. I thought it was cute how he did that to be with her. It wasn't at all what I expected it to be, but I liked that. Keep up the good work!

Oh, and I thought it was an original.[:

First thing right off the start, lovely layout, I'm a huge fan of black with another color, thought it looked wonderful and the banner is just stunning.

I agree with all the comments above me.

I've seen a few stories where names aren't mentioned but I think this is a story that it truely worked for. No names being mentioned throughout this really seemed to work for itt, it seemed like it worked more this way then if you had mentioned names.

I thought it was a very well written story, I loved the way how you described there marriage was falling apart, thought that was really cool and well written. =) Awesome story.

I love this :)

Like the comments above, I like that you used no names. It's not done very often, and when it is I find it very cool.
I really liked this from start to finish. Beautiful story layout also.
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That was cute :D I agree with the person above on the matter of no names. It was clever, so that people can kind of imagine in their minds anybody they want. It's a win situation for everybody.

The banner was brilliant. It was. xD

I love that you didn't use any names, it makes the story better for me, because it leaves more room for imagination. I can make them whoever I want. I love that.

The banner is bloody brilliant, and the title is amazing. And it fit nicely with the story, you even used it in the story.

She didn’t mind it though; she knew her marriage was broken.