Falling in Love at a Coffee Shop - Comments

This was so adorable! I loved it!

That was absolutely amazing. Never stop writing stories

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I am drowning in lovely mushy gushiness!!!!!
the first guy in here you see wearing a purple shirt, you have to trip and fall on top of him. –J
I can’t believe I didn’t even recognize that it was you. XD Hah. You set me up! Okay, I dare you to walk in here with a guitar and sing and play, “Falling In Love At A Coffee Shop” by Landon Pigg
I was laughing, that was all so cute!
The beginning was a little long and tedious, i have to say. This story was written very simply, not too much worded poetry...but I think that's okay, because your plot was poetry itself, longwinded as well so if you'd done too much, it would have been too complicated.
Ummm the words were definitely well done, you fit them in swell. This was seriously just adorable, i swear...I'm so glad you put in that song, because its one of my favorite which was so unfair. But all the same, that was... it was really sweet, and I definitely enjoyed it. You took an almost cliche plot and turned it so unique and so adorable!
98/100

I love this! It's so sweet and very well-written.

I love love loved it! :D It was so cute ^^

Amazing! I love that song. And your story was quite fantastic. Haha.