Won't Turn Out Right - Comments

  • winslow06

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    I'm pretty sure this story just mind fucked me, but at the same time I just could not stop reading it. Other than that, I have no clue as to what else to say, I just know that the mind fucked part had to be said. It was really interesting though, so great job on creating a great plot.
    September 18th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • MellyMelMel

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    It was an amazing story and an amazing journey, can't wait to read the sequel
    July 29th, 2011 at 06:23am
  • XylonYuuka

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    I think this is a great story but its really confusing me like all this elephant and ring master and card game stuff. I have absolutely no clue whats going on :L
    May 24th, 2011 at 08:27pm
  • Sister Ginger

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

    Damn I need to check my e-mail more often. Keep losing track of the updates.

    GAH WHAT KIND OF ENDING WAS THAT?! SO MYSTERIOUS.
    May 13th, 2011 at 03:59am
  • Hey It's Frankie

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    =o OMD I freaked when you said last chapter!! But I'm so happy there's a sequel!! =D
    YES!! MCR & A7X IN THE ONE STORY?! DREAM COME TRUE! A7x & Mcr stories are my favorite fan-fics!!
    May 3rd, 2011 at 08:29am
  • Jupiter's Census.

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    Fucking NAILBITER!!!

    Can't wait for the sequel :)
    May 3rd, 2011 at 07:35am
  • Hey It's Frankie

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    =O Is it Zacky?!?!?!?!
    April 30th, 2011 at 08:44pm
  • Jupiter's Census.

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    That left me breathless.

    YESSS CHARITY LIVED! Good Zacky. It was cool how he told Charity about his life. I wonder what's going to happen with Shads and Gates? Hmm.
    April 29th, 2011 at 03:16am
  • xxbrittxxx

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    WOW... oh my... WOW ... ive had this comment page up for like 2 days trying to think of something to say and i still cant! This was unbelievably great. I felt like i was there in the heat and the fire. Although that was cruel, leaving it where you did. Does Charity survive? Will we learn more about the rest of the boys? You never fail to disappoint with your chapters, you have a true gift and I hope the next update is soon. Loved it! :D
    April 29th, 2011 at 02:55am
  • Sailor Meranda

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    Definate twist. Wow, I am loving it. So sad though. *tear drop*
    April 27th, 2011 at 09:07am
  • DancinginYourPoison

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    Love your story so much! Update soon please :)
    April 27th, 2011 at 04:00am
  • Hey It's Frankie

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    Awh no! I don't want it to end!! =[ Awesome chapter though!! Zacky's rant was...kinda creepy. I thought he was sane-ish? Wicked all the same =]
    April 26th, 2011 at 08:35pm
  • FullMoonLullaby

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    Super stoked to see what happens next! Loved the update. :)
    April 26th, 2011 at 01:27pm
  • RunningOnRhymes

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    In. Tense.
    April 26th, 2011 at 07:37am
  • RunningOnRhymes

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    In. Tense.
    April 26th, 2011 at 07:37am
  • Jupiter's Census.

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    That. Was. Fucking. Intense.

    I loved every minute of it! >.<

    I hope Charity makes it out alive. :3 And nowwww it makes sense to why Johnny's turning in the rest of the guys. Ahhh. Update soon. Like today.
    April 24th, 2011 at 01:33am
  • Sister Ginger

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    DAMN IT. I meant Johnny.
    April 23rd, 2011 at 04:19pm
  • Sister Ginger

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH GO JIMMY. WTF WTF WTF.

    MORES!
    April 23rd, 2011 at 04:19pm
  • Hey It's Frankie

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    Awh poor Johnny!! <3<3 I feel so sorry for him!! =[
    April 23rd, 2011 at 01:30am
  • Hey It's Frankie

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    GO CHARITY GO!! RUN! RUN RUN RUN!!
    I was whispering that at the laptop because I'm not supposed to be up lol Awh poor Matt and Jason =[
    April 23rd, 2011 at 12:59am