Fiction - Comments

Hello darling :) I have to say I fully agree with Meg, this is some of your most honest work and it definitely pulled at my heart strings. And just the thought of being in your story, is an honor, I can't wait to read more <333

Well thanks Kasey. It is very hard to write this, I cried when I started it. I've got a few more chapters written, but I'm editing, cutting and rewriting a lot of it so I'm not posting yet. This is by far the hardest thing I've ever wrote. I was honestly going to stop writing all together, but I seen Avenged Sevenfold at pointfest last month and right before they played Buried Alive, Matt said something that made me cry standing there, and then thinking about that, it made me wanna write again. He said that its been hard for the last nine months, but that Jimmy is in everything he does, and everything he does in his memory. So to me, this is my way of thanking Jimmy for his talent, and everything that he's given us. This is HIS story. I don't know a better way to thank someone as wonderful as he was, but by doing what I love, and thats writing.

RIP Jimmy Sullivan
forREVer

I love this story so far and I can't wait to read more. I started to cry a little bit since the whole Jimmy thing still gets to me, I still find it a little hard to listen to their music or write a story about them with out wanting to break down in tears. It just makes me want to squeeze my RIP Jimmy t-shirt for dear life and I probably would if it wasn't in the wash. Anyway, great story and I can't for another chapter.

Looking good babe. Chapter 2, though short, started you off right. Some of your most honest work. Dive into though, Dilly. It'll be better if you flush out the feelings. It'll put the realism into it the more you dive. Just a suggestion <3