August 28th, 2013 at 07:57am
Holy crap, that was really good!
It was sad without being totally whine-y, like most sad stories are. The language was totally just... beautiful. (Heh, that sounds lame. Whatever.)
I think what I like the most is that it's realistic. You know, not "OMG, no one luvs me, boohoo" but like, genuine hurt. It was intense and seriously good.
Heh, so now I'm going to have to go read the actual story. :D
PS. That song was cool.
Your description and how you weave us (the readers) into Wes' head was completely flawless. I just felt for him and I feel such strong emotion through this piece although it's fairly short.
You are an amazing author!