As promised, here is your comment talking about what you are being judged on!
Layout: Your layout is nice and simple, which makes it very easy to read. I like that you have included the picture in the author’s note. It makes it clearer to the reader what you are talking about throughout the story.
Summary: You don’t actually have a story, which meant that I didn’t know what to expect from the story. I’m not sure whether this is a good or bad thing.
Story: I like how you wrote the story as a flashback or memory. It was very inventive and I thought that the story itself was very good. I like that you used “Zacky” without making it into a fan fiction (being and A7x fan myself, that made me smile). I thought that both Zacky and Tahlia both seemed like believable characters which made the story itself more realistic. I’m not going to lie, I cried at the end of the story. It was just so sad and so sweet.
Layout: Your layout is nice and simple, which makes it very easy to read. I like that you have included the picture in the author’s note. It makes it clearer to the reader what you are talking about throughout the story.
Summary: You don’t actually have a story, which meant that I didn’t know what to expect from the story. I’m not sure whether this is a good or bad thing.
Story: I like how you wrote the story as a flashback or memory. It was very inventive and I thought that the story itself was very good.
I like that you used “Zacky” without making it into a fan fiction (being and A7x fan myself, that made me smile). I thought that both Zacky and Tahlia both seemed like believable characters which made the story itself more realistic.
I’m not going to lie, I cried at the end of the story. It was just so sad and so sweet.
Well done for your fantastic entry!