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  • cin

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    I don't know why I thought she was going to pick Zack instead. But it was kind of obvious she would end up with Brian again.

    I really like your stories but my favorite so far is Perfect. (:
    January 7th, 2013 at 04:35am
  • Madam Shadows;

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    Wow, this story was amazing! You really are an amazing Author! <3
    September 21st, 2012 at 04:23am
  • Nada

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    WOW that was really good i have been reading this all day and im sad its over :p really was good!!!!!amazing!
    August 26th, 2012 at 03:57pm
  • Flowerr

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    This story was amaziiiing!!!<3
    October 13th, 2011 at 12:49am
  • HotRanger69

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    this was an amazin story!
    June 27th, 2011 at 11:21am
  • Haylie Jaed

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    Jealous of Val. I want boy/girl twins. Though I suppose I have many, many years for that to happen, since I'm only twenty-one. XD Huzzah!!

    I loooooved this! I didn't expect them to have another kid! ^_^ It was very fitting, and it was nice seeing Savannah grown up, too. =) You don't see that too often. Good job!

    xoxo
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    June 11th, 2011 at 11:36am
  • hachie

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    OMG the story has come to an end!!!!
    I feel really sad because this has come to an end!
    BUT I a extremely happy that Kia and Brian have given their relationship another chance.
    And Brian finally married Kia and took her off the market!
    Now they have a second child, a little boy who is most definitely is going to be like his father when he grows up! X3
    I know that for sure because both of his parents are gorgeous and handsome!
    Lucas is going to be a heartbreaker!
    And Brian finding amusement chasing boys up that are after his daughter that is like the exact replica of Kia! XD
    I am happy that everyone has gotten a happy ending, Brian and Kia are together and stronger than ever.
    Zacky is together with Gena and Matt and Val are expecting twins!!!!
    This story is amazing and I have enjoyed reading this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I VERY MUCH LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEW STORIES THAT YOU WILL COME OUT WITH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    June 11th, 2011 at 03:23am
  • autumnfreakshow

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    I loved the ending :]
    So perfect for the story!
    You did an amazing job, and I will stay tuned to your other stories!

    Thanks for sharing your idea with all of us readers :]
    Great job!
    June 10th, 2011 at 09:05pm
  • afraidofeverest

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    Great ending!
    June 10th, 2011 at 08:05pm
  • angy_something

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    I looooooved it. I'm happy for all of them
    Love ya
    June 10th, 2011 at 07:54pm
  • Jazz1617

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    Great story and a great ending. I'm glad Kia ended up with Brian. :)
    June 10th, 2011 at 07:12pm
  • brokenarrow

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    i like her with brian
    June 10th, 2011 at 06:57pm
  • brokenarrow

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    awwwww i love tthe ending!!!
    June 10th, 2011 at 06:57pm
  • afraidofeverest

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    I wanted her to be with Zacky. </3
    I love your writing style, though!
    June 10th, 2011 at 06:44am
  • afraidofeverest

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    I wanted her to be with Zacky. </3
    I love your writing style, though!
    June 10th, 2011 at 06:44am
  • LimeBerryLatte

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    No :(
    Can't we like have a sequel in which Brian cheats on her again, she gives up on him and then she goes back running to Zacky who takes her back and they live together forever and ever and ever? :D
    June 7th, 2011 at 10:52pm
  • Synyster's_Vengeance

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    Aww she chose brian! Sad to see this story end though... I'll keep an eye out for your next story though! Xx
    June 6th, 2011 at 08:00pm
  • dawn8279

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    wow great ending can't wait to read the epilouge
    June 6th, 2011 at 05:03pm
  • LindsaySometimes

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    Aww that was soo cute!
    I'm happy that her and Brian got together.
    June 5th, 2011 at 06:45am
  • thatcrackfox

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    aah i love the ending :') & she DEFINITELY made the right choice by choosing Brian ^^ can't wait to read the epilogue now :) x
    June 4th, 2011 at 06:10pm
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