March 21st, 2011 at 05:06am
-Chapter 3-
I adore how Patrick is becoming the "fatherly figure" and when Alessandria told Patrick she loved him, my heart melted. Oh, they are so perfect for each other.
Gabe and Erica better be in this for the long haul, because I want them to work out so badly. Erica has transformed so much, and it's amazing to be able to see the changes she has gone through. Gabe is so perfect for her, they are amazing, I love it.
How do you amaze me with every sentence you write? This was the perfect ending!
You made Patrick, Alessandria, and DJ seem like a family at the end, yet keeping it open to let our minds wander. Patrick and Alessandria are the picture perfect couple.
I LOVE how you had Gabe hold off on the sex and create a more emotional relationship first. But, again, you left it open to see what Erica decides to do. It was just... PERFECT.