Honest in Lies - Comments

I liked the summary of this story it reminded me of the summaries from the demonata which is like my second favorite book series after Wicked Lovely and their summaries (The Demonata at least and the second book of the Wicked Lovely series kind of did it as well) had passages from the actual story as their summaries as well, it makes you want to figure out what's going on.

The first chapter was odd, as in the situation she was in I mean how did she even get there in that situation which I am assuming at this point was real though I'll have to wait and see if she notices bite marks on her arms first to figure out if it happened or if she had a vision.

Cool story I'm subscribing and recommending.

So I found a mistake in the second paragraph I'm the third sentence.

Her back arched off the slate she was tied to, trying to free herself once again.

I'm not sure what you were going for so I don't exactly know how to correct it, but it sounds wrong, it could be as simple as changing to to too

Or putting as before she, removing trying and was, changing tied to tried

I'm sorry if our seems confusing but I don't actually know if the sentence is wrong or if I'm just not getting it.

Sorry for taking so long to do this.

amazing(:

Hey just read all 32 chapters... It was great.. I can't wait to read the sequel to it... Well done, judging by the comments, it's a widely liked story!

i would love a sequel that chapter was so sad! still Amazing story.

Great last chapter! Yeah, I think that it should be the ending and then start the sequel ;D
I love the intensity you put into you writing; definatly (sp?) one of my faves <3

This is so good, you are a fab writer

This story right here is the shizniz. This is amazing. :) I'll put on my page for people to check out ur stories. :)

that was so sad i love this story though.

Update pleeeeaase! I hate your cliffhangers, always so mean.

Loved the chapter! The training session was detailed nicely and left me smiling :)
Very excited for the next chapter to come so I can know who attacked her! :D

Great story! Has the perfect balance of sexuality, romance, suspense, and horror! xD
Marvelous job! :)

Amazing story! Please update soon!!!!

I reaaally like this.
I've only gotten to chapter 15 though. ;) but it's amazinggg<3

Gaspard is so yummy. The perfect guy for the part.

You need more comments!

This is aaaaamazing, as always!

Oh my...!
Control is always a good thing to have...;]
I was listening to Atreyu when I read this update and, when she attacked the one hunter, I was listening to their album Suicide Notes and Butterfly Kisses and the song A Vampire's Lament came on and where the song isn't nearly as hardcore came on and I laughed because it says
'God help m, I'm so tired,
but in my dreams, the wolves ate out my soul.
God help me, I'm so frightened,
but in my dreams, the wolves tear out my heart.'
And I must say, that it made me happy.
Also, I love your updates and keep working! =]

Ah, I'm so glad she didn't 'kill' Jesse (:
I would have gone insanee.

Aww! But...werewolves, fighting, and hunters oh my! Hehehe...
I love this story, it's pretty dang awesome.
Time for me to re-read it to some different music, now! xD

Well, Candy got what she wanted all along (x
It was brave of her though for letting Gaspard drink from her in his time of need.
<3
He better still love her the same or I will come into your story and kill her, kay?(x