lol this is a kinda random story.........you could easily turn it into a longer, more complex story, one which i personally would deffinatly read......i liked it and it was well writen.... ^.^
September 21st, 2010 at 08:51am
A bright red sandal was on the side of the street, new apparently.
How exactly did it get there?
Was it brought here by a dog? No, there were no teeth marks from what I could see, and the straps were still intact. So, a dog didn’t bring it here.
Then was it forgotten, but why? It’s new and it’s not necessarily awful, it’s actually somewhat appealing, and with the right set of clothes I’m sure it would make a decent outfit.
What would make a person leave just one sandal, unless it was unintentional? It could have just slipped. No, that wouldn’t make sense, they would figure out that their sandal was missing eventually, by the simple fact of the cold concrete or the uneven steps that comes with wearing only one sandal.
Were they mugged? What a ludicrous idea, we’re inside a military base, the chances of that happening are slim. Besides, we're on an intersection, a busy one at that, even at night it must be busy.
A small child appeared and took the red shoe, laughing at the top of his lungs, saying ‘he found it’.
Or, perhaps a sandal is just a sandal.
Please take in mind that you should edit out all grammatical errors.
I have taken to liberty to fix it, so please. One less story with the mistakes will really help out Mibba.