Smirt - Comments

  • AlyVeraa

    AlyVeraa (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    this story is great, i love it! i just started it today! Cant wait to read the other one♥
    June 14th, 2012 at 02:51am
  • KillboyPowerhead

    KillboyPowerhead (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    One of my friends suggested I read this, and I'm sure glad I did!
    I love the way you write, and I loved this so much! The chapters were short, sweet, and simple. I absolutely LOVED this. I just finished, and I'm going to read the sequel now. (:
    My favorite character is/was Gavin, I don't really know why, just his personality made me love him!
    Amazing job on this, I loved it and I'm going to read Eclat now! (:
    <3
    July 25th, 2011 at 07:08pm
  • weed demon

    weed demon (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    I just read everything, and I absolutely adore it. It's brilliant.
    You captivated me from the first chapter. Dahlia is so mysterious, yet so easily to relate to. And I felt that you captured Christofer perfectly.

    Also, I love how you subtly incorporated many of the songs into the story. In fact, the last sentence in chapter twenty-four is one of my favourite lines in the whole story.
    “I’ve been waiting for that to happen for so damn long, Chris. And that’s the lousy truth.”

    Overall, you did an outstanding job with this. And I cannot wait to read the sequel.
    July 12th, 2011 at 05:25am
  • pocahontas.

    pocahontas. (565)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    Oooh, this is really good. I spent all night last night and a few hours today just reading to finish it. I love it. Good job! I'll be reading the sequel now. Also, I loved the layout.
    March 26th, 2011 at 03:22am
  • theDilusionist

    theDilusionist (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Guam
    Aww, I suscribed for this a long time a go, but for somI didn'te reason it went inactive :( So I picked off where I left off, and it just so happens your next update was your last one.
    Anyways :D I hate cliffhangers! Why the hell did Ingle only message Dahlia, but call whats-her-face AND bring her on tour? Sure they're childhood friends, but she ditched him! Gosh.
    To be honest, I really like how you left off the last chapter with a sort of overview of what happened during the year, easing into that dang cliffhanger at the end. Not too much description, but there wasn't any cliche or overused words, either. Can't wait for the sequel. :D
    February 12th, 2011 at 03:45pm
  • Zombie.Highway

    Zombie.Highway (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    United States
    HOLD THE PHONE!!!!
    Having it end so short and swiftly, and subtlety dramatic, AMAZING!
    Can't wait to see where the sequel goes and who he may end up with :)
    February 12th, 2011 at 02:32am
  • shootingstar2332

    shootingstar2332 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    26
    Location:
    United States
    YAY! Chris is done being a dumbass! :) Please update soon!
    February 5th, 2011 at 12:09am
  • ArielAnn

    ArielAnn (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    I screaming so loud right now!!! Hahaa :)
    February 4th, 2011 at 02:35pm
  • annabre

    annabre (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    CUTE!!!! I cant wait for the prequel =D, Gavin HAS to my FAVORITE lol =D
    February 4th, 2011 at 03:44am
  • Imanacidrainbow

    Imanacidrainbow (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    wowowoowowoowowowowowowowoowow <3
    February 2nd, 2011 at 03:03pm
  • oceanstar21

    oceanstar21 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Guam
    oh my god rianne!!!
    loved the update i only had time to read it now
    but mannnnn im super anxious for the next update now
    hahahahahaahahha
    keep up the good work babes
    January 28th, 2011 at 11:28pm
  • Hannah Umm...

    Hannah Umm... (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Antarctica
    The picture you have for "Gavin" is my friend Campion.
    hahaha
    Good story, btw(:
    January 22nd, 2011 at 02:36am
  • XXCookieMonsterXX

    XXCookieMonsterXX (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    Awesome story!! just one question, where is the story set? if you have a place thanks :)
    January 9th, 2011 at 08:32am
  • Blue Eyes White Lies

    Blue Eyes White Lies (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    I have a confession?I'm sort of hooked on this.
    January 1st, 2011 at 11:46am
  • oceanstar21

    oceanstar21 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Guam
    awe i love it!!!! i haven't gone on mibba in a while soo yea i fell behind on my subscriptions....
    ANYWAYS!! Love the story babes have an awesome New Year and i'll see you at school next week =)
    December 30th, 2010 at 07:43am
  • Alwaysshoutforever

    Alwaysshoutforever (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    i love the story. its really really good.i cant wait for the next chapter. lease continue :)
    December 27th, 2010 at 12:53pm
  • flyers

    flyers (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    I love your writing style and the over all prettiness (is that a word? :p) of this story! :)
    December 24th, 2010 at 12:24am
  • moonshoes mcgee

    moonshoes mcgee (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    This. Is. Amazing. I feel super lucky because I stumbled apon it. I love how you write, it's so flow-y and amazing. I'm totally subscribing and begging for an update soon!
    December 13th, 2010 at 01:30am
  • breakfast after ten;

    breakfast after ten; (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    Okay, I only read the first 9 chapters but I love this story and I'm going to come back to it soon. <3

    I love your short chapters. They're short, but they have a lot of detail. I love the plot, the way your characters have developed, and the layout is gorgeous. I love the quick and easy friendship between Dahlia and Christofer and I can't wait to see where this goes. I'm subbing.
    December 8th, 2010 at 01:36am
  • Phoebe_

    Phoebe_ (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    102
    Location:
    United States
    :) OK awesome story, Can't wait for another update :D

    Consider me subscribed
    December 6th, 2010 at 02:59am