Mindless Reception - Comments

The banner is so cool. It's perfect, you know? I wonder if I'll meet you again in the afterlife, long after the sun burns out and the curtains close on my vanishing act. That line is the best in the whole thing. I mean, that's saying something, because it's all so beautiful. But I love the metaphor you used. I see a point. It's to make people be jealous of your wicked writing skills.

First of all. The layout!

WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW.

Yeah so WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW basically sums up the content, too. So here's what you get:

WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW. Five stars. xD

Oh man, this is beautiful and unique. I love how nothing really makes concrete sense, yet it falls in line together flawlessly.

I see Neptune in your eyes... I love that. It makes me think so many things: of the person having huge blue eyes, of the person having a deep reception of the universe, of the person having huge unconventional beliefs. I honestly loved that.

I love the bit about the Jesus tattoo too. That was just a pure stroke of genius, really.

Everything was so random but it all fit together perfectly.
Not everybody can pull something like that off, and you did.
It was beautiful, it was poetic, and it was just stunning.
You are wonderful at writing, you have a way with words like I've never seen before.

Completely lovely. I adore the phrases you use. You have gorgeous and exquisite language. It's like you're telling a story, without actually saying anything. You leave the reader to figure out what is going on, and try to piece together everything. I simply love that.

My favorite line was, "There's an expiration date stamped onto my foot and a tattoo of Jesus Christ on my tailbone, it's one of those things you want to take back but no amount of lazers or skin treatment can fade him."

I felt that there was a hidden meaning behind that, but I was too dull to understand. Either way, that sentence really got me, and I read it three times before continuing with the story.

Seriously, this was great. Stunning job.